The Setting Sun

The Setting Sun

As sun sinks low at eventide 
I sit and gaze across the lea 
at open spaces far and wide
and hear soft voices calling me.

There’s something ‘bout this time of day
when curve of earth the sunlight bends,
and one by one the stars display;
a soothing peace and calm descends.

As silence falls upon the land
my tranquil thoughts will turn within 
and ponder all the schemes I planned
when I was young and full of vim.

The silent voices in my mind
remind me of the long lost dreams
that yesterday I hoped to find
but somehow lost in life’s extremes.

The fading light from setting sun
and growing shadows that it cast
reminds me that these thoughts rerun
are but a figment from my past.

I now look back and think upon
the dreams to which I ne’er replied 
and ponder where life might have gone 
as sun sinks low at eventide.


April 23, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 7/13/2021 9:24:00 AM
Lovely
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/13/2021 11:41:00 AM
Thank you, Anais. :)
Date: 5/11/2021 8:50:00 PM
Dear John, thank you so much for rare moments of pleasure of reading a real poetry with fascinting words and wonderfull rhyme! It differs greatly fom many poems I read.The Setting Sun makes me ponder over the sense of life. I enjoyed it very much!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/12/2021 2:25:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, Marat, I’m glad you enjoyed my poem. It seems the older we get the more we ponder over the sense of life. John
Date: 5/5/2021 4:00:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your work. It has a calm quality to its lines. We can always think about what might have happened if we took a different road but if a person has been born again, the road they are on is the road on which God can use them unless they are going the wrong way and that does happen sometimes. Don't ever look back and want to change your life only look forward cause that is the only place we can make changes. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/5/2021 5:03:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Sara, your words are wise indeed. Truth is, there is very little in my life that I would change if I had the chance. I hope you have a wonderful day. John
Date: 4/29/2021 8:59:00 AM
I find the more I age, the more I regret. It must be a common age "thing." You put it into beautiful words: "...I now look back and think upon the dreams to which I ne'er replied..." so beautifully said.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/30/2021 6:15:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Ann. I don't know if it's a common age thing or not but I know I do a lot of reflecting.
Date: 4/27/2021 12:44:00 PM
As we get on in years we often reflect on the choices we made and wonder if they were the right ones. Perhaps we'll never really know John. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/28/2021 2:07:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Tom. While I don’t regret the choices I’ve made I have these thoughts a lot; I guess that’s a sign I’m getting old. Hope all is well in your part of the world. John
Date: 4/24/2021 8:24:00 PM
"There’s something ‘bout this time of day, a soothing peace and calm descends" I completely agree. My heart is able to reflect and linger, when all the world is quiet. *Pondering* on what might have been- sometimes, yes, but never letting such thoughts keep me from embracing "what is" This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/25/2021 4:30:00 AM
Wise words my dear friend, thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John
Date: 4/24/2021 4:19:00 PM
John, I enjoyed reading your poem! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/24/2021 5:27:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 4/24/2021 12:02:00 PM
John, this is the kind of poetry that inspires. The enchantment of your words leads one to reflect upon their own experiences in life. This is outstanding and going into my faves! Congratulations on your First place win. Blessings xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/24/2021 1:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Connie, and for saving this to your favorites. I often think about decisions I made when I was a young man (a long time ago), and wonder what life might have been like had I made a different decision. I'm glad my poem was able to inspire you to do the same. Hugs, John
Date: 4/23/2021 3:57:00 PM
Eventide, a lovely word. It comes to all of us eventually. I loved this beautiful poem, I could relate to every verse. thank you, John. A fav for me...
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/24/2021 4:40:00 AM
Thanks so much,Shirley, I’m glad you enjoyed it and could relate. And thanks for saving it to your favorites. Hugs, John
Date: 4/23/2021 9:13:00 AM
Love the second verse! A beauty, John!
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/23/2021 9:18:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Date: 4/23/2021 5:05:00 AM
I love this... love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/23/2021 6:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gina, I'm glad liked it so much. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs, John
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