The 4 Seasons - TFS

Sweetly
comes spring
with rain
and sun;
nature 
is so
alive

Hotter
days make
me laze.
I thrill
to feel
summer
arrive.

Autumn
brightly
adorns
trees and
cool nights
lengthen
out then.

Snow drifts
aglow;
winter
brings cold
till spring
returns
again.
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Date: 9/15/2025 12:41:00 PM
Andrea, this is an exceptional poem! CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 9/15/2025 8:38:00 AM
I see your fantastic poem received 2nd place, and that prompts me to return the same comment to you that you left for me. This would've been a first place win for me, Andrea. Deservedly so. I'm on the verge of ignoring most contests again.
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Date: 9/14/2025 5:49:00 PM
It's great if you can embrace every season as you have in this poem!
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Date: 9/14/2025 4:26:00 PM
Nicely done, this was a tricky contest, congratulations
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Date: 9/14/2025 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations, dear poetess on your win in this contest with a lovely poem on the four seasons, depicting succinctly the features of each season. Wishing you a charming autumn.
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Date: 9/14/2025 3:43:00 AM
Very nicely written as usual, Andrea. Thanks for entering my contest and Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 8/30/2025 7:38:00 PM
Lovely TFS!
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Date: 8/30/2025 12:42:00 PM
Excellent poem, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 8/28/2025 5:30:00 PM
Delightful, Andrea. I'm sure it'll do better than well. Love, CayCay
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Date: 8/28/2025 10:57:00 AM
Nice summary of all the four seasons in two syllables lines. Nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 8/28/2025 9:20:00 AM
You have beautifully summarised the salient traits of all four seasons in short lines of two syllables. All the Best, Andrea!
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Date: 8/28/2025 1:30:00 AM
Spring the most beautiful and pleasant season Like the poem
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Date: 8/27/2025 5:39:00 PM
sincerely liked your imagery; best wishes with this entry in the contest, Sara
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Date: 8/27/2025 1:50:00 PM
Indeed, all in Nature's order. Well done! Delightful imagery.
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Date: 8/27/2025 1:18:00 PM
- Lovely written, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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