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Tanka-Haiku Surprise

On a sunny day,
we went to get a dogie.
Driving the back roads,
Excitement was in the air.
Would our new pet be waiting?

We looked all over,
surprise ~ there sat my angel,
heaven had touched earth.

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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/6/2025 7:02:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Creative lines penned. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/6/2025 12:55:00 PM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write to be, Creative lines penned. I enjoyed writing this one about my angel. Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away...........

Valsa George Date: 8/3/2025 10:46:00 PM Getting a new pet is an anxious and exciting moment. We will be searching for a sweet one and if we happen to spot one, the joy doubles. Glad, you had such an exciting moment. Well done. Congratulations! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/5/2025 10:22:00 AM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write. A new pet is pure joy. This was from many years ago. She has gone over the rainbow animal bridge. I cannot wait to see her again. She was one in ten million, My Angel... I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away......

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/3/2025 9:27:00 PM Congratulations on your win, with a poem filled with happiness, Paula! Very best wishes. :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/5/2025 10:18:00 AM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Congratulations and Very best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away......

Sotto Poet Date: 8/3/2025 2:06:00 PM Such a delightful poem, Paula. Congratulations on your contest win. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/5/2025 10:16:00 AM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write to be, a delightful poem. I enjoyed writing this one about my angel. Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away......

I Am Anaya Date: 8/3/2025 12:14:00 PM Your angel won a placement, . Congratulations dear Paula! xhugs__Anaya Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/5/2025 10:14:00 AM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write. I enjoyed writing about my angel from heaven. So glad she placed. Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away......

Paige Hind Date: 8/3/2025 11:34:00 AM Cute!! Congrats! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2025 11:42:00 AM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write to be, cute. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away......

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/3/2025 11:08:00 AM - Back with a congratulation on your tanka/haiku poem, Paula :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2025 11:38:00 AM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write again. Always great to see you here. Hugs... Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away......

Oliver Mckeithan Date: 8/3/2025 10:48:00 AM Congrats on your placement in my contest Paula. Am a dog owner so I know the feeling. Well said especially in the haiku portion Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2025 11:37:00 AM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write. I enjoyed writing this one for your contest. Thanks for having it and for my placement. Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away......

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2025 9:16:00 AM "4 Place" Tanka-Haiku Surprise ~ Date Written:7/30/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet...... Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/2/2025 12:56:00 PM Paula, this is delightful!! Janice Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2025 9:16:00 AM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Glad you found my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write to be, delightful. It happened many years ago. She was one in ten million, My Angel... I enjoyed writing this one. Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away.................

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/30/2025 5:29:00 PM awwww...such a delightful poem, Paula. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara PS have a splendid evening Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/31/2025 11:39:00 AM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Best wishes with the contest. Glad you found my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write to be, such a delightful poem. It happened many years ago. She has gone over the rainbow animal bridge. I cannot wait to see her again. She was one in ten million, My Angel... Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away.................

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/30/2025 1:34:00 PM Aww…you brought a memory back to me too! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2025 3:13:00 PM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write. It was from many years ago. I hope it was a good memory, I brought back to you. Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away......

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/30/2025 12:35:00 PM - Oh an exciting day Paula ... a lovely poem :) - I'm sure it was cute :) - (I'll do this later :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2025 3:10:00 PM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write. It was from many years ago. She has gone over the rainbow animal bridge. I cannot wait to see her again. She was one in ten million, My Angel... Hugs... Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away......

I Am Anaya Date: 7/30/2025 12:03:00 PM Very nice Tanka-Haiku dear Paula! I want to know all about the dogie now :D good luck!__Anaya Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2025 3:07:00 PM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, good luck. Glad you enjoyed my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write. It was from many years ago. She has gone over the rainbow animal bridge. I cannot wait to see her again. She was one in ten million, My Angel... Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away.................

John Fleming Date: 7/30/2025 11:28:00 AM Nicely contrived, Paula. :) john Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2025 2:24:00 PM I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my "Tanka-Haiku Surprise" write. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a day filled with fun and blessings as you write away.................

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2025 11:15:00 AM Tanka-Haiku Surprise ~ Date Written:7/30/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet...... Login to Reply