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For Oliver's Contest. 31/7/25     Haiku: 5,7,5.     Tanka: 5,7,5,7,7.    


came to hear her sing to me she is everything her soft voice lilting her song of vows sworn a heavy heart was now torn lost love so forlorn as I sat there before her she'll not know I adore her

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Date: 8/4/2025 4:31:00 PM
I liked the rhyming in this. Congrats on the win
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Date: 8/4/2025 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. What a nice way to go for the contest. Sara k
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Date: 8/3/2025 10:31:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Speaks. Of course I couldnt see the picture when judging but a wonderful prompt for your poem
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