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She'll Never Know

For Oliver's Contest. 31/7/25     Haiku: 5,7,5.     Tanka: 5,7,5,7,7.    


 came to hear her sing
to me she is everything
her soft voice lilting

her song of vows sworn
a heavy heart was now torn
lost love so forlorn
as I sat there before her
she'll not know I adore her

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Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2025 at 4:31 PM I liked the rhyming in this. Congrats on the win

Sara Kendrick August 4, 2025 at 8:38 AM Congratulations on your winning work. What a nice way to go for the contest. Sara k

Oliver Mckeithan August 3, 2025 at 10:31 AM Congrats on your placement in my contest Speaks. Of course I couldnt see the picture when judging but a wonderful prompt for your poem