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August 27, 2025, entered in Mark Toney's Poetry Marathon Mile 11

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SEPTEMBER FALLS

Sun’s rays have weakened lately. Cool winds blow,
Effectively allaying summer heat.
Perhaps fall lovers should be patient, though.
There’ll be more hot days. Summer’s not complete.

Enthusiasm reigns on Labor Day.
Most backyard chefs are firing up the grills.
Because it’s summer’s “last hurrah,” some say,
Each fan of hot days relishes these thrills.

Responses to the end of summer range
From great elation to a sense of pall.     
Autumnal coolness, each expected change,
Leaves turning red and gold~~I love it all!

    Let every season reap admirers’ praise,
    Since each possesses unique winning ways.
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Date: 9/30/2024 11:54:00 PM
Hi Janice, Really enjoyed your Sonnet style Acrostic. Best regards.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/1/2024 7:59:00 AM
Martin, thanks so much! Janice
Date: 9/30/2024 1:39:00 PM
you touched on several great aspects of fall with this beautiful poem.Great ending couplet as well and good job with doing yours like a sonnet. Congrats
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/30/2024 4:17:00 PM
Andrea, you have made my day~~my week! Thanks so much for sponsoring and for my thrilling win!! Janice
Date: 9/16/2024 2:08:00 AM
"Let every season reap admirers’ praise, Since each possesses unique winning ways." So very right. Each season has its own charms. You have described the transition beautifully well from summer to autumn. A great entry. All the Best dear Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/16/2024 11:07:00 AM
Valsa, thanks a million for this great response to my poem! Janice
Date: 9/12/2024 8:52:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem especially the lines about leaves turning red
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/12/2024 9:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Karen. Janice
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