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Sensations

Ethereal poetic musings 
create celestial visions,
like a gymnastic athlete 
with lively coloured ribbons,
renewing life as circles of light 
swirl into exotic symbols.

Lights flicker as cameras 
flash to perpetuate the scene,
holding spectators captive 
with astounding imagery.

Celestial visions overwhelm 
sensations ne’er forgotten.
Especially when she hugged him
And kissed him over and over again.
Till I wake up.  Was it a dream?
Or was it just a sensation?
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Date: 1/16/2025 8:16:00 PM
Sounds very pleasant. Hope it's true! :)
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Date: 1/16/2025 4:13:00 AM
Lovely sensations to have and remember, Victor:)
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Date: 1/14/2025 10:48:00 PM
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could control our dreams and tailor them to our own desires where everything was perfect, we'd never get up. Tom
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Date: 1/14/2025 10:07:00 AM
You ask a great question at the end creating the atmosphere in your poetic venture. Lovely write Victor receiving surreal sensations...
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Date: 1/14/2025 9:36:00 AM
"Lights flicker as cameras flash to perpetuate the scene, holding spectators captive with astounding imagery." -- Love that! Maybe we only think we know what is dream and what is real? Thought is everything...when it comes to reality.
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Date: 1/13/2025 7:31:00 PM
Wow! I simply love this delightful work, entwining the spiritual, the ethereal with love here now in the material.
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Date: 1/13/2025 6:45:00 PM
Dreams can be such a pleasant experience! I love the story of your sweet dream, Victor. Wonderful writing! :)
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Date: 1/13/2025 1:25:00 PM
So , so true, ethereal poetic muse, until you wake up. Nicely done
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Date: 1/13/2025 1:04:00 PM
Excellent moving poem :)
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Date: 1/13/2025 11:23:00 AM
I do believe it was a little bit of both, sweet dreams Victor.
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Date: 1/13/2025 11:09:00 AM
Dear Victor, Your exceptional poem focuses on Dreams and emotion; it is invigorating and exciting. You have crafted an impressive scene and remarkable celestial imagery.
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Date: 1/13/2025 10:02:00 AM
Dreams are also sensations. I keep waking up from mine and having them immediately leave my mind. I hate that!!
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Date: 1/13/2025 8:32:00 AM
Sometimes i have those moments where i wake up from such real dreams , that seems so close and vivid, i question whether it was just a dream. Youv described that so well here in such a creative manner! Always a pleasure reading you dear victor! Sending you light always
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Date: 1/13/2025 6:10:00 AM
Sweet dreams Vic. You went from ethereal to sensual in the blink of an eye
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Date: 1/13/2025 3:35:00 AM
Dream or sensation, it is energizing and thrilling. You have created a dazzling scene and celestial visions, dear Victor.
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Date: 1/13/2025 2:25:00 AM
It was a sensational dream Victor, one to remember for its splendour… Beryl
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Date: 1/13/2025 2:05:00 AM
- Dreams are something that most people are fascinated by and think about... through dreams many emotions and thoughts are channeled, Victor :) - hugs
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