Riverside Summer Outing


My family joined a summer outing
So excited for swimming and rafting
Mom got our swim vests with suits
Dad just brought his parachutes
And kept eyes on us, flying and shouting.

summerlimerick

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2025 9:53:00 AM

Reads like a fun time in the sun. So glad you shared this one with us. I hope on this outing wasn't where your accident happened. Sara K

Len Gasun

Date: 7/19/2025 8:44:00 PM

Summer Funny Limerick Contest Judged: 7/13/2025 9:05:00 AM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 3 (up to 4th multi-w)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2025 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write. Great Picture... I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your win................

Len Gasun
Date: 7/19/2025 8:40:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend, Paula. I'm glad you enjoyed my simple write. Thanks a lot and God bless you always. I'm glad you're back. Happy weekend! Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/14/2025 9:37:00 AM

Congratulations Len! :)

Len Gasun
Date: 7/15/2025 4:22:00 PM

Thanks a lot my dear poet friend Linda. Congratulations to you as well. Hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/13/2025 2:50:00 PM

Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.

Len Gasun
Date: 7/15/2025 4:22:00 PM

Thank you so much dear poet friend Tania for acknowledging my poem in your contest through my win. Your approval on my poem means a lot to me. Thanks a lot and more power to you and your poetry. God bless! Hugs