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7.10 am July 5, 2025

 

 

Is Whitewater Rafting Safe for Kids? A Mother's Experience.

A FAMILY THAT STAYS APART, SHOUT.

My family joined a summer outing So excited for swimming and rafting Mom got our swim vests with suits Dad just brought his parachutes And kept eyes on us, flying and shouting.

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Date: 7/19/2025 8:44:00 PM
Summer Funny Limerick Contest Judged: 7/13/2025 9:05:00 AM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 3 (up to 4th multi-w)
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Date: 7/19/2025 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write. Great Picture... I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/19/2025 8:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend, Paula. I'm glad you enjoyed my simple write. Thanks a lot and God bless you always. I'm glad you're back. Happy weekend! Hugs
Date: 7/14/2025 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations Len! :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/15/2025 4:22:00 PM
Thanks a lot my dear poet friend Linda. Congratulations to you as well. Hugs
Date: 7/13/2025 2:50:00 PM
Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/15/2025 4:22:00 PM
Thank you so much dear poet friend Tania for acknowledging my poem in your contest through my win. Your approval on my poem means a lot to me. Thanks a lot and more power to you and your poetry. God bless! Hugs
Date: 7/12/2025 11:24:00 AM
Sounds like a lot of fun!!
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/15/2025 4:15:00 PM
Yes, dear. Summer outing is always fun. Thanks a lot for reading my poem. God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 7/6/2025 10:09:00 AM
Great ending line. I can just see him flying over the family!
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/7/2025 1:16:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem and for your lovely comment my dear poet friend. Hugs

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