Rainbow

R-raining and pouring
        a-again a black cloud
        i-is seen
        n-next to the sun
        b-both at the same time
        o-oh to see
         w-with both rain and sun 
              a wonderful rainbow
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Date: 8/29/2024 10:03:00 AM
Very good, Darlene, and it reminds me that I haven't seen one of these in quite some time, now. Hmmm....
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Date: 8/30/2024 10:31:00 AM
Hello Jim, Thank you for the lovely comment I do not see them too often either. When I do see them i enjoy the colours I see. I hope all is well with you. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/9/2024 12:09:00 PM
Darlene, it is always remarkable to see a rainbow. You captured the key with poetic and scientific accuracy. We seem to see many more of them in the summer when we get showers. The way you put this together makes me smile!!!
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Date: 8/9/2024 3:41:00 PM
Hello Duke, I wish there were suny rainy days so more rainbows can be seen. Thank you for this wonderful comment.my friend. oh, i aam happy to her I made you smile. My friend. enjoy yur evening. /Darlene/
Date: 8/7/2024 12:22:00 PM
Great acrostic! Your numbers are so high! Great to make your acquaintance and looking forward to reading more of your work!
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Date: 8/7/2024 5:00:00 PM
Hello tom Valles, Hi Tom it is nice to meet you. I will be reading your poetry to. I am looking forward to it. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/2/2024 6:35:00 AM
Had a rainbow show here yesterday late afternoon. Both the rain and rainbow was both welcomed after the recent heat..how wonderful and beautiful a rainbow is. Emilia : )
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Date: 8/2/2024 10:29:00 AM
Hello Emilia, Yes Emilia, a rainbow is wonderful. I wish there could be more rainbows. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 8/1/2024 2:16:00 PM
How lyrical, this is like a beautiful chorus i would play on repeat, i love how youv written especially “a black cloud is seen” very descriptive dear darlene. The last line is stunning! Youv delivered one worthy of all the accolades and i sing these words as i read and send you light always. Pleasure reading
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Date: 8/1/2024 3:37:00 PM
Hello Ink Express, Thank you for a wonderful; comment. I also like the last line of my poem. I love rainbows. Thank you for sending me the light. Thank you for the wonderful comment. My friend. /Darlene/
Date: 7/31/2024 7:38:00 PM
I love magic moments in nature, like the ones your beautiful poem describes. So well written. Best wishes. :)
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Date: 8/1/2024 5:06:00 AM
Hello Evelyn, I do as well Evelyn. I wish there were more rainbows. Best Wishes. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 7/31/2024 1:30:00 PM
it truly is a delightful sight that one rarely gets to see. Great acrostic
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Date: 7/31/2024 3:33:00 PM
Hello Andrea, Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 7/31/2024 5:29:00 AM
Delightfulness and optimism! Great shape and message! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 7/31/2024 9:47:00 AM
Hello Kim, Thank you for this wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 7/30/2024 6:58:00 PM
"o-oh to see w-with both rain and sun a wonderful rainbow" -- Magical. Love it!
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Date: 7/31/2024 9:46:00 AM
Hello Joe, Yes it is magical. I love it to. Enjoy your day my froiend. /Darlene/
Date: 7/30/2024 4:48:00 PM
Lovely Acrostic, Dear Darlene! True - rain and sun together - a wonderful sight!
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Date: 7/31/2024 9:45:00 AM
Hello Mala, Yes it is. I always enjoy a rainbow. Friendship & Love /Darlene/
Date: 7/28/2024 2:47:00 PM
Rain or shine its there
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Date: 7/28/2024 3:29:00 PM
hgell Joseph may, yes rain or shine the rainbow is there. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 7/28/2024 12:31:00 AM
Delightful! Very lovely acrostic. Thank you for sharing it. I love rainbows and get to see them when I'm watering my yard. Blessings
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Date: 7/28/2024 10:54:00 AM
Hello Eilleen, Oh, yyes there are rainbows there to.I see them on the hallway floor. Also on the wall. Rainbows are beautiful. Hugs. /Darlene/ x
Date: 7/27/2024 11:40:00 PM
Time stands still in such moment, lovely Darlene!
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Date: 7/28/2024 10:56:00 AM
hello James Goff, yes James time does stand still in that moment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 7/26/2024 6:10:00 AM
Very lovely write Darlene just like a breath of fresh air thanks for sharing many blessings have a wonderful day.
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Date: 7/26/2024 9:51:00 AM
Hello Yolanda, Hi! So nice to see you. thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 7/26/2024 5:07:00 AM
Such beauty in the rainbow Darlene! Your Acrostic perfectly portrays the creation and the experience of beholding its wonder!!! I hope you've been well!! Happy Friday xxoo
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Date: 7/26/2024 9:53:00 AM
Hello Mike, Hello Mike, I hope you are feeling better. I love rainbows. There are so many beautiful colors in a rainbow. Happy Friday. xxx ooo./Darlene/.
Date: 7/24/2024 1:44:00 PM
This is beautiful Darlene. I enjoyed this. Well done :)
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Date: 7/24/2024 4:49:00 PM
Hello Heidi, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 7/24/2024 6:26:00 AM
Illusion of life.
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Date: 7/24/2024 10:18:00 AM
Hello Vilmos Zoltan Galyo, So nice to meet you. Yes it is an illusion of life.Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 7/23/2024 6:39:00 PM
It takes rain and sun to create the splendor of a rainbow and it takes a poet like you to tell us about it with such beauty, loved it Darlene !
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Date: 7/24/2024 10:22:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I like the rain. I like the rain better when the sun is out shining and a black cloud comes around releasing the raindrops. for the rainbow. thank you for your lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 7/23/2024 1:22:00 PM
Beautiful acrostic, Darlene. I love your rainbow. Here today the sky was clear with a burning sun. It's only nice to go out at night, when It's fresher. Well done my friend.! Love/María
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Date: 7/24/2024 10:25:00 AM
Hello Maria, Thank you Maria, You have a hot humid day. Try to keep cool. I do hope that you are feeling better now. Hugs. Love, /Darlene/
Date: 7/23/2024 1:41:00 AM
Ah, oh, you writte so well about the magicof nature.Beautiful. Pangie xx
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Date: 7/23/2024 10:01:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, Thank you Panagikota. Hugs. xxx /Darlene/
Date: 7/22/2024 9:19:00 AM
A lovely write for the lovely "Rainbow." Have a beautiful day writing away....................
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Date: 7/22/2024 9:53:00 AM
Hello Paula, thank your for the lovely comment. I will enjoy my day writing away. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 7/21/2024 10:42:00 AM
nice
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Date: 7/21/2024 4:00:00 PM
Hello Jay, I hop all is well with you. I hope you ae enjoying your Sunday. Thank you for the lovely comment. My friend. enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
Date: 7/21/2024 9:46:00 AM
I love rainbows Darlene they are so vibrant and always make me smile! hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/21/2024 4:01:00 PM
Hello Jan, I likje them to. They also make me smile. The colors are so beautiful. Hugs. xxx/Darlene/
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