Positively Sure

I'm positively sure this day will be
much better than the days that came before
The universe will smile and dance with me
I know that there is goodness yet in store

The worries in my mind will drift away
on tails of clouds that roam in azure sky
My thoughts will prance like ponies out at play,
and dreams will spread their wings so I can fly

I'll paint the world in rainbow coloured hues,
the grey of yesterday no longer seen
My heart will beat in time to poet muse,
a dulcet rhyme displaying the serene

This day will be a wondrous one for me
I'm positively sure, just wait and see!
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Date: 12/5/2024 5:49:00 AM
I needed this one. Well expressed. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 11/27/2024 12:38:00 PM
Eileen, I lead you to the path...and now you own it! That "yellow brick road" now has many colors and many passions - thanks to you -- hugs my dear poet!
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Date: 10/27/2024 7:10:00 AM
Hi Eileen, I admire your positivity have a lovely day. Xx
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Date: 10/14/2024 1:33:00 AM
We are all praying, beautiful poetry.
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Date: 10/11/2024 5:07:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your POD, Eileen, with this beautiful write. Prayers with you and your countrymen. X Su
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/11/2024 6:45:00 AM
The situation in Lebanon isn't getting better. Keep up in your prayers. Thanks for thr visit. Big hugs.
Date: 10/7/2024 9:05:00 AM
Back to thank you for the POTD.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/11/2024 6:53:00 AM
My pleasure.
Date: 10/7/2024 7:55:00 AM
I know you've been down in the dumps of late, and your reasons are certainly valid. So how nice to see a beautiful, uplifting sonnet from you. Wishing you peace and happiness
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/11/2024 6:53:00 AM
I can't explain how I've been doing lately. Hanging on by a thread. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 10/7/2024 6:43:00 AM
Beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/11/2024 6:54:00 AM
Kind of you. Much appreciated. :)
Date: 10/7/2024 6:21:00 AM
Thank you for your comments. I'm not doing well at the moment. I'll try to come back when better.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/7/2024 6:21:00 AM
So unlike the poem, sadly.
Date: 9/30/2024 1:17:00 AM
One always admires joy in a poem like yours. I don't mind dark poems, but when there is joy in a poem, it is always appreciated.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/11/2024 6:54:00 AM
This is out of character for me. I tried to see the positive for this one. Glad you life it. Blessings
Date: 9/24/2024 3:24:00 PM
A beautiful poem Eileen. Your positivity amazes me.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/11/2024 6:56:00 AM
Thank you. I'm feeling anything but positive lately. Wrote this some time ago. I'll be positive some that reflect my feelings now in war torn Lebanon. No positive line there.
Date: 9/23/2024 7:45:00 PM
Lovely positive thoughts in your sonnet Eileen, sure to be of help to someone, somewhere… Beryl
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/11/2024 6:56:00 AM
Hope so, dear. We read poetry to feed the soul. Thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 9/18/2024 4:17:00 PM
AW- this is happy! Wishing you the best!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/11/2024 6:57:00 AM
Thank you, dear. Your support always lifts my spirit.
Date: 9/18/2024 4:14:00 PM
a poem filled with promise and joy, dear poet
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/11/2024 6:58:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and commenting. Blessings, dear
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