Positively Sure

I'm positively sure this day will be
much better than the days that came before
The universe will smile and dance with me
I know that there is goodness yet in store

The worries in my mind will drift away
on tails of clouds that roam in azure sky
My thoughts will prance like ponies out at play,
and dreams will spread their wings so I can fly

I'll paint the world in rainbow coloured hues,
the grey of yesterday no longer seen
My heart will beat in time to poet muse,
a dulcet rhyme displaying the serene

This day will be a wondrous one for me
I'm positively sure, just wait and see!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Watt Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 7:17 PM
Dear Eileen, this poem truly lifted my spirits today. Sometimes I find we write poems as deposits to our emotional bank account, to be withdrawn at a future date when they can do the most good. I hope this message of hope and brings you "rainbow coloured hues" when the gray of life has settled upon your soul like a layer of dust. I know you love the sonnet form, and this poem is simply sublime. Blessings, John
Lamoureux Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 5:49 AM
I needed this one. Well expressed. Hugs Rick.
Cornish Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Eileen, I lead you to the path...and now you own it! That "yellow brick road" now has many colors and many passions - thanks to you -- hugs my dear poet!
Read Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:10 AM
Hi Eileen, I admire your positivity have a lovely day. Xx
Nuwas Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 1:33 AM
We are all praying, beautiful poetry.
Richards Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 5:07 AM
A belated congratulations on your POD, Eileen, with this beautiful write. Prayers with you and your countrymen. X Su
Manassian Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:45 AM
The situation in Lebanon isn't getting better. Keep up in your prayers. Thanks for thr visit. Big hugs.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Back to thank you for the POTD.
Manassian Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:53 AM
My pleasure.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 6:43 AM
Beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina
Manassian Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:54 AM
Kind of you. Much appreciated. :)
Manassian Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 6:21 AM
Thank you for your comments. I'm not doing well at the moment. I'll try to come back when better.
Manassian Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 6:21 AM
So unlike the poem, sadly.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 1:17 AM
One always admires joy in a poem like yours. I don't mind dark poems, but when there is joy in a poem, it is always appreciated.
Manassian Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:54 AM
This is out of character for me. I tried to see the positive for this one. Glad you life it. Blessings
Inman Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 3:24 PM
A beautiful poem Eileen. Your positivity amazes me.
Manassian Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:56 AM
Thank you. I'm feeling anything but positive lately. Wrote this some time ago. I'll be positive some that reflect my feelings now in war torn Lebanon. No positive line there.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 7:45 PM
Lovely positive thoughts in your sonnet Eileen, sure to be of help to someone, somewhere… Beryl
Manassian Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:56 AM
Hope so, dear. We read poetry to feed the soul. Thank you for your kind comment.
Hind Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 4:17 PM
AW- this is happy! Wishing you the best!
Manassian Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Thank you, dear. Your support always lifts my spirit.
Parker Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 4:14 PM
a poem filled with promise and joy, dear poet
Manassian Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Thank you for visiting and commenting. Blessings, dear
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