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The bottom is made out of rubber hit it, you bounce up again The top though is left uncovered fly past it on wings of a pen

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Date: 8/3/2025 4:42:00 PM
enjoyed the metaphor and wit as well as the title. Well done, sir. Have a pleasant week ahead, Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2025 8:10:00 PM
Wishing you a pleasant week as well, Sara.
Date: 8/3/2025 4:31:00 PM
As a guy who’s in an out of writer’s blocks on an almost never ending cycle… I get this so profoundly. The bounce may be a little squidgy but the fly pass is supersonic. I was gonna write my autobiography… but you just did it for me… you ain’t getting your mitts on the royalties though! ;-)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2025 8:08:00 PM
Tell you what. Let's run your autobiography up the proverbial flagpole and see if it flies. Then we'll deal with 'royalties.' ~ One-eyed Jack
Date: 8/3/2025 10:08:00 AM
Your pens are more than handy it seems G W whats the ink connsumption and range like though.?
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Date: 8/3/2025 10:08:00 AM
Your pens are more than handy it seems G W whats the ink connsumption and range like though.?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2025 8:06:00 PM
Ink consumption is up, range is down. So I brought the Lone Ranger back into town. ~ Tweedle-dee and Tweedle-dum, aka gw
Date: 8/3/2025 7:23:00 AM
Short but packed with meaning—love the metaphor! The idea of bouncing back and flying high with poetry is really uplifting.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2025 8:02:00 PM
Just follow the bouncing ball, I guess. Thanks, Rowena.

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