Poetry's Perspective

     The bottom is made out of rubber
        hit it, you bounce up again

     The top though is left uncovered 
        fly past it on wings of a pen
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Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 10:11 PM
Stated like a poet would. Down inside I knew you could. Once you decided that you should. I'm a little strange tonight ... oh, it's past midnight. Sleepy time, my friend. Night night! BB
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 4:42 PM
enjoyed the metaphor and wit as well as the title. Well done, sir. Have a pleasant week ahead, Sara
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Wishing you a pleasant week as well, Sara.
Flood Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 4:31 PM
As a guy who’s in an out of writer’s blocks on an almost never ending cycle… I get this so profoundly. The bounce may be a little squidgy but the fly pass is supersonic. I was gonna write my autobiography… but you just did it for me… you ain’t getting your mitts on the royalties though! ;-)
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 8:08 PM
Tell you what. Let's run your autobiography up the proverbial flagpole and see if it flies. Then we'll deal with 'royalties.' ~ One-eyed Jack
Maverick Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Your pens are more than handy it seems G W whats the ink connsumption and range like though.?
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 8:06 PM
Ink consumption is up, range is down. So I brought the Lone Ranger back into town. ~ Tweedle-dee and Tweedle-dum, aka gw
Maverick Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Your pens are more than handy it seems G W whats the ink connsumption and range like though.?
Velasco Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 7:23 AM
Short but packed with meaning—love the metaphor! The idea of bouncing back and flying high with poetry is really uplifting.
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 8:02 PM
Just follow the bouncing ball, I guess. Thanks, Rowena.
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