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For Brian Strand's Your Choice N Poetry Contest 25 May 2025
      
                           ___ / |____
        ~      ~   ~  \_______/ ___/ | ___~   ~    ~
                ~      ~         ~     \_______/ ~~  ~  
                   ____/ |____
      ~     ~   \_______/ ~  ~ folded from daydreams  
                        paper boats launched on pavements~
                                 laughter sails away 

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Date: 5/26/2025 12:31:00 PM
So cute! Congrats!
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Date: 5/26/2025 8:34:00 AM
Very creative my friend... you always weave something so meaningful with your words...
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:21:00 PM
Love this. Congrats
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:13:00 AM
Hello JCB, i like the way the poem was done. Hugs. /Darlene/
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