Notes About The Poem
For Brian Strand's Your Choice N Poetry Contest 25 May 2025

paperboats hiku

      
                           ___ / |____
        ~      ~   ~  \_______/ ___/ | ___~   ~    ~
                ~      ~         ~     \_______/ ~~  ~  
                   ____/ |____
      ~     ~   \_______/ ~  ~ folded from daydreams  
                        paper boats launched on pavements~
                                 laughter sails away
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 12:31 PM
So cute! Congrats!
One Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 8:34 AM
Very creative my friend... you always weave something so meaningful with your words...
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 10:21 PM
Love this. Congrats
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 10:13 AM
Hello JCB, i like the way the poem was done. Hugs. /Darlene/
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