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"Those who labour in the earth are the chosen people of God" — Thomas Jefferson

Ode To Summer's End

The swallow has gone,
Flown away, so has its mellow song
And so forth we go,
into bluer skies—indigo
Tempts drift further till tepid
Southern shades should not bid 
Amid its alibi is incidence,
sun shrinks in appearance
Grayest shadows deepen  
The first cool breezeway creeps in
Much warmth shall be ebbing,
heralding winter's woolen webbing
I count my blessings
of summer’s endings:
Abundance of sunshine so bright
Zephyrs on a tender August night                             
Book clubbing with best of friends,
Labor Day weekend marks summer’s end
As Summer ends Fall shall begin,
and what joyful gifts a winding wind
against glistening skin
Autumns kiss of this kind,
an earthly bliss entwined 
And when the swallow returns,
no longer summer yearns
no longer summer yearns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/4/2025 8:53:00 AM
You write so amazingly well with much thought to each line. What caught my attention especially was "Book clubbing with best of friends, Labor Day weekend marks summer’s end As summer ends Fall shall begin, and what joyful gifts a winding wind"
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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/4/2025 9:00:00 AM
I leaned on some science, the angle of incidence makes the sun appear farther away in Fall. I used Labor Day as a marker of Summer’s end. TyVm, Ryan!
Date: 9/3/2025 5:49:00 AM
I really don't like seasonal poetry as it tends to be same old but I did like a few lines here, especially "book clubbing with my friends" and "zephyrs on a tender August night." Nice
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Date: 9/3/2025 8:06:00 AM
I'll take your review as a compliment in that I sound like the others ( real poets) as they call themselves. I leaned on some science, the angle of incidence makes the sun appear farther away in Fall. I used Labor Day as a marker of Summer’s end. I think it's quite different actually, from all the rest. TyVm- Tommy, always a pleasure to see you and Mia! Hope you both had a lovely long Labor Day weekend!
Date: 9/2/2025 10:23:00 AM
Beautiful poem saying goodbye to summer and welcoming autumn. In a few months, you will see all the hills around in the Los angeles valley.
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Date: 9/2/2025 6:41:00 PM
The hills shall come alive with vibrant colors. I'm all in! Tyvm __xhugs
Date: 9/2/2025 4:07:00 AM
Hello Anaya, beautifully penned and an enjoyable read. A lovely goodbye to Summer and a nice welcome to Autumn. Have a great day.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/2/2025 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Zyrool for the review and day wishes!
Date: 9/1/2025 7:25:00 PM
so delicious , loved it all, alliterations and music, images, this is brilliant, enjoyed very much
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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/2/2025 3:23:00 PM
Ah, I like your review, Yann! I'll miss August especially, and good friendships. TyVm xhugs__Anaya
Date: 9/1/2025 5:42:00 PM
Work in progress while the long Labor Day weekend is fresh in mind, there is more to add..and shall follow up with the banned book club... hope your holiday was a lovely one! :D
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