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Couplet   ---   2024 December 26

BEST POEM FOR THE COUPLET FORM LIST

Old lies remote, yet they find a way
Though it does not shine like New Year's day
It wakes hope to raise it to the top
Ask past and present for them to swap
It's the age that will soften their hearts
Heaven's eyes will see, and Grace imparts
Angels sing a suite composed by Bach
As that day nears, boost time on a clock
Old ask politely, excuse me dear
New says certainly, it's nice and clear
As an old wish sits on top, tick tock
Feebly ask, add more years please, Good Luck.

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Date: 12/27/2024 12:40:00 PM
- Love how you start this poem, Hilo ... a creative poem, for this contest... best wishes (my entry got a bit boring after reading yours) - Happy New Year :) - hugs
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Date: 12/27/2024 1:53:00 PM
Untrue, as I'm glad to see both our names or just yours when I don't make the cut, which is fine with me. Mahalo, for your kind words of encouragements~William

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