New Year

Athough you were near me
I was looking for you 
Behind the trees,
In the paddy fields,
By the village pond's shore
Where long ago
The pond shimmered.
Then with gentle steps
You came to fetch water

Old melodies receded,
leaving no records behind.
Witnesses of your
former charm have disappeared.
How quickly  time flew ,
how much the atmosphere 
has changed .

Yet, hope persists in me.
Promise of the new days
in this old age
remains in my mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 1/3/2025 3:48:00 AM
Yes. Hope always exists. New Year to appear with new prospects and old love to realise with new thrill. Wish you a very Happy New Year. Blessings
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/3/2025 7:43:00 AM
Thank you.Wish you a happy New Year
Date: 1/2/2025 8:34:00 AM
yes there is still hope, an lovely reading, thanks poet happy new year
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/2/2025 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Wish you a happy New Year
Date: 1/1/2025 6:01:00 AM
- A sensitive, poem Akham - Happy New Year ... with lots of cheer :) - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/1/2025 8:23:00 AM
Thank you.Wish you a happy New Year.
Date: 12/31/2024 8:16:00 PM
Yor first stanza resonates deeply within me. ~ Former resident of a small Middle East village. HNY, Akham ~ Gershon
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 12/31/2024 8:47:00 PM
Than you,Wish you a happy New Year
Date: 12/31/2024 10:30:00 AM
Such an interesting poem. Love your creative style.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 12/31/2024 5:33:00 PM
Thank you .Wishing you a happy New Year.
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