New Year

Athough you were near me
I was looking for you 
Behind the trees,
In the paddy fields,
By the village pond's shore
Where long ago
The pond shimmered.
Then with gentle steps
You came to fetch water

Old melodies receded,
leaving no records behind.
Witnesses of your
former charm have disappeared.
How quickly  time flew ,
how much the atmosphere 
has changed .

Yet, hope persists in me.
Promise of the new days
in this old age
remains in my mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dutta Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 3:48 AM
Yes. Hope always exists. New Year to appear with new prospects and old love to realise with new thrill. Wish you a very Happy New Year. Blessings
Singh Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 7:43 AM
Thank you.Wish you a happy New Year
Rolland Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 8:34 AM
yes there is still hope, an lovely reading, thanks poet happy new year
Singh Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 9:43 PM
Thank you Wish you a happy New Year
Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 6:01 AM
- A sensitive, poem Akham - Happy New Year ... with lots of cheer :) - hugs
Singh Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 8:23 AM
Thank you.Wish you a happy New Year.
Wolf Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 8:16 PM
Yor first stanza resonates deeply within me. ~ Former resident of a small Middle East village. HNY, Akham ~ Gershon
Singh Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 8:47 PM
Than you,Wish you a happy New Year
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 10:30 AM
Such an interesting poem. Love your creative style.
Singh Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 5:33 PM
Thank you .Wishing you a happy New Year.
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