Naive Faith

Chose a Title; Naïve Faith, Sponsor – Edward Ibeh – 8-27-25
Naïve synonyms: callow, guileless, innocent, pure, genuine, honest, simple, sincere
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Naïve Faith

Callow faith walks with wide eyes
In playgrounds littered with stark cunning
When adorned innocence
Seeks to soar where angels fly
Not blinded by fool’s gold
Nor looted by evil’s glittery tinsel
Or minds darkened by drugs of ebony
That plagiarizes honesty
With rationalized temptations
In ravished glamour.

Artless faith, clothed by incorruptible purity,
Shivers when simplicity senses
A wrinkle in infinity - 
Guileless belief skirts gullible’s traps 
Clothed in a gift of sight.

When beastly motives
Try to sideswipe honesty
With glitz and jewels of paste
Dangling shiny promises with dark underbellies
Naive faith, clothed in discernment,
Sees with candid clarity.

The rose still blooms despite attacks
By mold or mildewed rust
The sun still wakes the dawn
Even when eclipsed
Crowned by a faultless corona
As stars refuse to enter black holes
Faith embraces the innocent.
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Date: 9/7/2025 4:45:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this outstanding poem, Sam. "Callow faith walks with wide eyes In playgrounds littered with stark cunning" I loved this opening line, especially.
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Date: 9/6/2025 11:06:00 AM
Gorgeous, outstanding imagery and feel. Congratulations on your win. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 9/5/2025 12:58:00 PM
What a powerful "Naive Faith" write. Your last line is so true. "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a lovely day/weekend writing away............
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Date: 8/31/2025 7:59:00 PM
A powerful verse, Sam - always faith filled and passionate
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Date: 8/29/2025 7:52:00 AM
What a beautifully powerful poem, Sam! Your phrases are exquisite and lasting. I love your poetic touch to "a wrinkle in Eternity." "...as stars refuse to enter black holes" and many more. A joy to read!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/29/2025 1:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ann. I so wanted to express that faith is neither simplistic nor without wisdom or judgement. Thank you for affirming my struggles to express the depth of "naive" faith that is blessed. Sending you my gratitude and blessings!
Date: 8/28/2025 5:19:00 PM
exquisite, absolutely exquisite poetry!!! I appreciate the sensitivity and profundity flowing through your poem. I especially liked the last two lines. Your poetic voice speaks to me; color me grateful, hugs, Sara Faving
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/28/2025 10:19:00 PM
Oh Sara, I am deeply grateful for your beautiful message! Thank you doesn’t really express my gratitude. I struggled with this theme and hoped that I could express that faith isn’t foolish or a Polly Anna but an amazing gift that is always seeking the place where “angels fly!” It is something to be cherished and desired. Sending you blessings!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/28/2025 10:16:00 PM
Oh Sara, I am deeply grateful for your beautiful message! Thank you doesn’t really express my gratitude. I struggled with this theme and hoped that I could express that faith isn’t foolish or a Polly Anna but an amazing gift that is always seeking the place where “angels fly!” It is something to be cherished and desired. Sending you blessings!!
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