My Angel

I beg you
stay a littler longer
you are to me
as the moon is to the night
I will never forget
my dream was to hold you 
in my arms
with whispers of delight
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Date: 6/26/2024 7:09:00 AM
Lovely romance!
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Date: 6/22/2024 7:01:00 AM
Arthur, this feeling of loss expressed so elegantly. When we experience it like this, it reveals the depth of our soul. You are so very kind to share this feeling expressed so directly and beautifully. I think anyone reading this (including me) feel the words that can bring tears to our eyes.
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Date: 6/15/2024 11:52:00 PM
You have melted my heart. xoxo
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/27/2024 12:36:00 AM
Loss is always so painful, thank you.
Date: 6/15/2024 1:49:00 PM
This is such a beautifully romantic poem dear Arthur. Pure and serene. It has great impact and I love your poetically chosen words to convey love so exquisitely. So enjoyed it. Blessings to you.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/27/2024 12:36:00 AM
You are very kind, i thank you from my heart.
Date: 6/8/2024 8:18:00 AM
A serene composition, wonderful in its spareness, enriched with your vivid images and analogies. Wonderful romantic poetry... What exquisite poetry.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/8/2024 2:04:00 PM
As always you are very kind, thanks!!
Date: 6/8/2024 3:10:00 AM
Absolutely delightful. I enjoyed this from the beginning till the end. Blessings, dear
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/8/2024 2:04:00 PM
Thank you Eileen, have a great day!
Date: 6/5/2024 7:33:00 PM
A cute little romantic verse... So beautifully written... Loved it...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/5/2024 11:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind soft words!
Date: 6/4/2024 4:40:00 PM
avery sincere poem, poet you say the best, you really love my friend, thanks a lot for your encouraging comments yann
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2024 11:32:00 PM
Merci bien, thank you Yann.
Date: 6/4/2024 1:36:00 PM
A simply sweet poem, I liked it's sense of romance.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2024 11:31:00 PM
Thanks Hilda.
Date: 6/3/2024 9:28:00 AM
This is pure romance at its best.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2024 11:31:00 PM
Thank you Victor, very nice of you!
Date: 6/3/2024 7:43:00 AM
I enjoyed reading "My Angel" write. It is lovely/romantic. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away.......................
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2024 11:30:00 PM
Very kind of you, thanks Paula
Date: 6/3/2024 7:09:00 AM
Arthur, your poetry is really lovely. Love is the force that propels humankind forward.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2024 11:30:00 PM
Yes I surely wish this to be true!
Date: 6/3/2024 7:03:00 AM
Very sweet!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2024 11:29:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 6/3/2024 4:36:00 AM
Ahhh!! Romantic. Sara K
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2024 11:29:00 PM
Thank you Sara :)
Date: 6/3/2024 4:35:00 AM
Now who is this loving sweet poem about Arthur! Enjoyed! Debx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2024 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Deb!
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