Minutes of the Meeting

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Poetry convention is now convened
attendance must be asked and seen
Eve - Present
Jan- Present
AnneLise -Present
Santa Claus- Present
Shakespeare -Present
Greek Ghost - Dead
Jesus - Three days late
Bach - Stringing things along

Poets all
dance and sing
paint, draw and hold purse strings
ah but some poets claim such glory
Why then do they cheat
upon Gods glory?

All in favor
clink our glasses
red wine and friendships
heaven exists
in bistros
of
honesty

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Soleia FireBorn

Date: 3/19/2019 1:50:00 AM

i enjoyed your poem, but I'm going to respond different than I do normally... pleasetake no offense.... the last word snags me on a hook... Im left questioning why that was your last word? I apologize for questioning it, it is your poem... I just dont feel it smoothly... it puts me on a ledge like feeling which in turn is great if that were intentional,but not sure it is...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/15/2019 7:35:00 AM

That was a fun read, Arthur.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2019 4:06:00 AM

Hey I really approve of the guest list minus Shakespeare I think he's dead boring lol:-) I hope you'd make a guest appearance too:-) seriously there are many super soupers I would love to meet, a convention will never happen but I have been so lucky to meet 3 lovely members and hope to meet more in the future:-) hugs Jan xx