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Mera and Reva On a Fall Morning

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This is another poem on the two sweet dogs; Mera and Reva :)

When they sensed that it was time for a walk
Mera showed her happiness with some cheerful barks
Her energy indicated gratitude in anticipation of fulfillment of such a simple task
Although very eager, Reva was standing silent showing her big sisterly protocols

Start of the walk was exciting as usual
Both were prepared with their leashes and collars
Tails were wagging with joy and enthusiasm
Muzzles were ready to snuffle and relish outdoors 

Roads were looking vibrant with autumn colors
Fallen leaves had spread carpet of jingles
Overjoyed Mera couldn’t get enough
Kept sniffing shrubberies in every corner

Reva kept herself busy marking her terrain
Drawing satisfaction from leaving traces in the domain
Mera’s creativeness was brought out by wet grassy scent
To justify her elation she had to take quite a few circular steps

The duo walked forward to another neighborhood
Smelling more sidewalks and bushes in passionate moods
A pale green round thing was spotted by Reva’s eyes
Her happiness increased when she got hold of that device 

The walk concluded with delightful admiration
Both returned home with minds full of appreciation

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Date: 10/25/2019 4:56:00 PM
Liked the poem about canines! Man's best friend! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/28/2019 12:48:00 PM
Thank you for your comments Matthew!
Date: 10/24/2019 6:27:00 AM
You let your reader get into the depth of your genuine feelings towards living creatures.. displaying the beauty of their conditional behaviours to a soul blessed with Love and kindness.. gifted with the beauty of poetry to render such a wonderful feel! My deepest regards and blessings, Smita.. a great pleasure to read your poetry..
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/24/2019 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Besma! Dogs are so nonjudgmental and full of unconditional innocent love! I love them dearly!!
Date: 10/23/2019 4:47:00 PM
Oh wow! I am so happy to be led to this one today. This is special. Very well written about them and their gratitude for the walk. It makes me think of my dog too. I enjoyed this a lot :)
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/23/2019 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Heidi! They both are very sweet and precious :)
Date: 10/23/2019 1:57:00 AM
Reva and Mera with the green device.. Nice poem..
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/23/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Jenish!

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