This is another poem on the two sweet dogs; Mera and Reva :)
When they sensed that it was time for a walk Mera showed her happiness with some cheerful barks Her energy indicated gratitude in anticipation of fulfillment of such a simple task Although very eager, Reva was standing silent showing her big sisterly protocols Start of the walk was exciting as usual Both were prepared with their leashes and collars Tails were wagging with joy and enthusiasm Muzzles were ready to snuffle and relish outdoors Roads were looking vibrant with autumn colors Fallen leaves had spread carpet of jingles Overjoyed Mera couldn’t get enough Kept sniffing shrubberies in every corner Reva kept herself busy marking her terrain Drawing satisfaction from leaving traces in the domain Mera’s creativeness was brought out by wet grassy scent To justify her elation she had to take quite a few circular steps The duo walked forward to another neighborhood Smelling more sidewalks and bushes in passionate moods A pale green round thing was spotted by Reva’s eyes Her happiness increased when she got hold of that device The walk concluded with delightful admiration Both returned home with minds full of appreciation
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This is another poem on the two sweet dogs; Mera and Reva :)