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Look How They Shine

Look at the stars how they shine for you and I 
better learn to appreciate them before we die !
See the banquet of beauty God has created 
feast your eyes on it and you will feel elated;

Dappled in light heaven is our Sacred Window 
absorb its secret as if you were a  leaning willow 
Incline your ear and listen for a soulflul whisper 
God has always been a generous tipper; 

Shine baby shine right where you are 
its always more peaceful up close to a star 
Drink the stardust of the moment 
be the rhapsody song of His cajolement 

Look at the stars how they shine for you and I , 
better learn to appreciate them , before you die !

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Arthur Vaso Date: 7/23/2025 10:59:00 PM What a beautiful sonnet! Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/24/2025 3:42:00 AM Beneath the stars we sit and wonder how God could create such beauty, thanks for the visit Arthur

Bill Baker Date: 7/23/2025 5:21:00 PM I also appreciate a well-written Sonnet, my friend. This is one! Thanks for sharing wisdom through your fine poetry. May you be blessed and your poetry be a blessing to many. Bill Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/23/2025 6:52:00 PM Glad you enjoyed the sonnet Bill, have a good night sweet dreams !

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/23/2025 4:14:00 PM loved this Sonnet; it was beautifully written. I especially liked: Dappled in light heaven is our Sacred Window absorb its secret as if you were a leaning willow wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/23/2025 6:52:00 PM May that Sacred Window always be open to you dear heart, have a good night, sweet dreams

Jay Narain Date: 7/23/2025 11:35:00 AM Beautiful poem. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/23/2025 3:32:00 PM Always a pleasure reading your comment Jay