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Look at the stars how they shine for you and I better learn to appreciate them before we die ! See the banquet of beauty God has created feast your eyes on it and you will feel elated; Dappled in light heaven is our Sacred Window absorb its secret as if you were a leaning willow Incline your ear and listen for a soulflul whisper God has always been a generous tipper; Shine baby shine right where you are its always more peaceful up close to a star Drink the stardust of the moment be the rhapsody song of His cajolement Look at the stars how they shine for you and I , better learn to appreciate them , before you die !

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Date: 7/23/2025 4:14:00 PM
loved this Sonnet; it was beautifully written. I especially liked: Dappled in light heaven is our Sacred Window absorb its secret as if you were a leaning willow wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs
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Date: 7/23/2025 11:35:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 7/23/2025 3:32:00 PM
Always a pleasure reading your comment Jay

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