Mystic Rose Rose Poet Sonnet

Look How They Shine

Look at the stars how they shine for you and I 
better learn to appreciate them before we die !
See the banquet of beauty God has created 
feast your eyes on it and you will feel elated;

Dappled in light heaven is our Sacred Window 
absorb its secret as if you were a  leaning willow 
Incline your ear and listen for a soulflul whisper 
God has always been a generous tipper; 

Shine baby shine right where you are 
its always more peaceful up close to a star 
Drink the stardust of the moment 
be the rhapsody song of His cajolement 

Look at the stars how they shine for you and I , 
better learn to appreciate them , before you die !

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Arthur Vaso July 23, 2025 at 10:59 PM What a beautiful sonnet! Mystic Rose Rose July 24, 2025 at 3:42 AM Beneath the stars we sit and wonder how God could create such beauty, thanks for the visit Arthur

Bill Baker July 23, 2025 at 5:21 PM I also appreciate a well-written Sonnet, my friend. This is one! Thanks for sharing wisdom through your fine poetry. May you be blessed and your poetry be a blessing to many. Bill Mystic Rose Rose July 23, 2025 at 6:52 PM Glad you enjoyed the sonnet Bill, have a good night sweet dreams !

sara Etgen-Baker July 23, 2025 at 4:14 PM loved this Sonnet; it was beautifully written. I especially liked: Dappled in light heaven is our Sacred Window absorb its secret as if you were a leaning willow wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs Mystic Rose Rose July 23, 2025 at 6:52 PM May that Sacred Window always be open to you dear heart, have a good night, sweet dreams

Jay Narain July 23, 2025 at 11:35 AM Beautiful poem. Mystic Rose Rose July 23, 2025 at 3:32 PM Always a pleasure reading your comment Jay