Lilly of Peace

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unrhymed tercets

When you awaken caught in the web 
where the dew sparkles of rainbows clearly cut 
sunlight appears dressed within a sparkle 

Diamond Light you illuminate beautiful 
warm radiates the sunshine into a heart
trapped as the food for your mercy 

The one star that forever paints roses 
remains blushing within the dawning morning 
when hail speaks falling with a Lion roaring thunder

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/29/2020 9:37:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + 7 +7 !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please be positive!And stay Healthy n’ Safe!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^