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Kai Michael Neumann's Peace Of Mind Contest...28 Jul 25
Bright is the dew that embraces my earth As seasons breathe with a lingering sigh; Oaks in teal ripple and glimmer in peace With hymns of ' thank you' I can't defy. In this free motion, tranquility abides North winds drift along, gentle and refined Encircling on the core of quietude; That hours glide perfectly, weaving a bind. For gratitude becomes my life’s keeper Each passing turns into a rune, a fire; Till lightness of ease imbues vibrant thoughts Benevolent as sunrays that inspire. Today leans again with a lustrous face In calm persuasion, my heart and soul meet, This wholeness bathing in its grateful flow When life resounds without any conceit.

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Date: 7/29/2025 9:24:00 PM
Should be a winner, Nette. You are a really gracious poet. :)
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Date: 7/29/2025 2:14:00 AM
Still writing rich and luxuriant poetry I see, Nette. Your poetry is always full of intense vibe and sparkling colour. Nicely penned! :) john
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Date: 7/28/2025 11:13:00 PM
Righteous rhyme! Xo
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Date: 7/28/2025 5:25:00 PM
uplifting words, Nette! I especially liked the 3d verse. I liked your imagery and flowing rhyme scheme as well. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 7/28/2025 8:35:00 AM
Gorgeous poem my dear poet friend & sis, Nette. Peace starts within us. A great winning piece sis. Thanks a lot for sharing! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs
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