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LIFE

What is "L"ife all about,
many times I get so mad. 
Should "I" have a doubt,
it can be both good and bad?
Will life turn out right,
even if we make peace and do not "F"ight?
Could the answer be Love, 
making it from up above?
Is it up to you and me,
"E"veryone working together is the magic key.

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Reason A. Poteet Date: 7/1/2025 6:16:00 AM Well-done, Paula, with this simple word to do a marvelous acrostic and congratulations on your placement and on a fine piece which shows your heart and soul. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/1/2025 7:53:00 AM Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my acrostic poem. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Len Gasun Date: 6/27/2025 10:52:00 PM Big Congrats on your win and on this very beautiful and creative acrostic poem my dear poet friend! I love it a lot especially the ending. Thanks for sharing. More blessings! Hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/28/2025 2:28:00 PM Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write and for your Big Congratulations. Glad you found this to be a, very beautiful and creative acrostic poem. Hugs... Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Joseph May Date: 6/27/2025 2:43:00 PM Wise words Paula, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/28/2025 2:25:00 PM Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write and for your Congratulations. Glad you found this to be, Wise words. I enjoyed writing this one. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/27/2025 10:48:00 AM "4 Place" LIFE ~Written: 5/28/2025 ~Written By Human Poet... Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/29/2025 1:22:00 PM I know you make a great friend! Your poems are very upbeat and peacable, dear Paula! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/30/2025 10:11:00 AM Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Glad you found this to be, very upbeat and peacable. I enjoyed writing this one. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/29/2025 12:52:00 PM ahhh, your hidden acrostic poem. Very nice. I need to get started on MINE Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/30/2025 10:08:00 AM Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Glad you found this to be, Very nice. It was fun to write. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/29/2025 5:57:00 AM introspective way to look at life, paula...lovely! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/29/2025 12:33:00 PM Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Glad you found this to be, lovely. Great you stopped over. I enjoyed bringing this LIFE to life. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/28/2025 11:01:00 PM What an original way to write a sort of acrostic embedded in a cute poem. You did well Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/29/2025 12:32:00 PM Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Glad you found this to be, a cute poem. Great you stopped over. Yes, a fun way to do an embedded acrostic write. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

CayCay Jennings Date: 5/28/2025 3:19:00 PM Clever and good flow and good luck, all of that ... CayCay Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/29/2025 12:28:00 PM Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Also thank you for your good luck. Glad you found this to be, Clever and good flow. Great you stopped over. I enjoyed writing this one. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/28/2025 1:31:00 PM - The magic key ... to life and love ... we all have it ... but not everyone chooses to use it - An uplifting and lovely poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/29/2025 12:26:00 PM Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Also thank you for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found this to be, An uplifting and lovely poem. Great you stopped over. Yes, the magic key is love. It was fun to write this one. Hugs... Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Beryl Edmonds Date: 5/28/2025 1:06:00 PM Life, it’s all up to us, to bring alive the magic touch. Lovely Paula… Beryl Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/29/2025 12:23:00 PM Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Glad you found this to be, Lovely. Great you stopped over. Yes, we need to bring alive the magic touch in everything we do. I enjoyed writing this one. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/28/2025 1:01:00 PM LIFE ~Written: 5/28/2025 ~Written By Human Poet... Login to Reply