LIFE

What is "L"ife all about, many times I get so mad. Should "I" have a doubt, it can be both good and bad? Will life turn out right, even if we make peace and do not "F"ight? Could the answer be Love, making it from up above? Is it up to you and me, "E"veryone working together is the magic key.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/29/2025 1:22:00 PM

I know you make a great friend! Your poems are very upbeat and peacable, dear Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/30/2025 10:11:00 AM

Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Glad you found this to be, very upbeat and peacable. I enjoyed writing this one. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 12:52:00 PM

ahhh, your hidden acrostic poem. Very nice. I need to get started on MINE

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/30/2025 10:08:00 AM

Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Glad you found this to be, Very nice. It was fun to write. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/29/2025 5:57:00 AM

introspective way to look at life, paula...lovely!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 12:33:00 PM

Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Glad you found this to be, lovely. Great you stopped over. I enjoyed bringing this LIFE to life. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/28/2025 11:01:00 PM

What an original way to write a sort of acrostic embedded in a cute poem. You did well

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 12:32:00 PM

Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Glad you found this to be, a cute poem. Great you stopped over. Yes, a fun way to do an embedded acrostic write. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/28/2025 3:19:00 PM

Clever and good flow and good luck, all of that ... CayCay

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 12:28:00 PM

Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Also thank you for your good luck. Glad you found this to be, Clever and good flow. Great you stopped over. I enjoyed writing this one. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2025 1:31:00 PM

- The magic key ... to life and love ... we all have it ... but not everyone chooses to use it - An uplifting and lovely poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 12:26:00 PM

Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Also thank you for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found this to be, An uplifting and lovely poem. Great you stopped over. Yes, the magic key is love. It was fun to write this one. Hugs... Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/28/2025 1:06:00 PM

Life, it’s all up to us, to bring alive the magic touch. Lovely Paula… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 12:23:00 PM

Thank You for reading about my "LIFE" write. Glad you found this to be, Lovely. Great you stopped over. Yes, we need to bring alive the magic touch in everything we do. I enjoyed writing this one. Love is the magic key as we write away..........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/28/2025 1:01:00 PM

LIFE ~Written: 5/28/2025 ~Written By Human Poet...