Life

You fleet so blithely, unaware
That here I stand, awash with care
My heart is heavy, lost to thrill
Of dreams deterred, it’s had its fill

I think of all that’s left undone
Of trophies that I haven’t won
Your blessings you did not bestow
Now time is short, and that I know

You mock me, Life, with hurtful glee
For me no joyous jubilee
My zenith, passed, my strength has waned
But tell me Life, what have you gained?

One less soul to tempt your fate
And as I linger at the gate
So loathe to leave you, though unkind
In death no solace can I find

So in this time that still remains
Come let us kiss, forget the pains
Life, be enticed to lover’s tryst
Grant me the joys that I have missed

Let’s fall in love, before I’m gone
Admit, dear Life, you’ve done me wrong
Let passion bless my dying days
For only then, I’ll sing your praise

Inflame my veins with your embrace
No tortured thought, but blissful grace
Life, intercourse with you is sweet
In this full bloom, the end I’ll greet

Bathed in the beauty of release
Where every conscious thought must cease
In afterglow of ecstasy
Please end my life, and let me be

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 9/2/2024 6:22:00 PM
This is sad. Very beautiful with a lot of emotions though- wishing you the best, Eileen. <3
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Date: 9/15/2019 3:41:00 PM
Your words light up the page and the essence of your word still rings true with my head. Little One, may you always be "bathed in the beauty of release" and your words continue to spread joy to us! Miss you!
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Date: 9/8/2019 9:40:00 AM
Thanks again Eileen for the birthday blog. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/7/2019 9:42:00 AM
Well. Life. what was that all about ? Nicely written thoughts for Everyman (and woman).
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Date: 9/4/2019 8:56:00 AM
I miss your poetry... I hadn't been back in a while, but had fave'd several of your poems. This is a wonder. God bless you and I hope to hear from you.
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Date: 8/28/2019 7:44:00 AM
So sad you have not been back.
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Date: 8/4/2019 9:09:00 AM
This one is in the top 100 new poems. Congrats.
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Date: 7/24/2019 6:20:00 AM
I just like to say that I could relate to this poem and the thoughts with effort. Enjoyable
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Date: 7/23/2019 12:51:00 PM
Dropping by with a hello and a hug.
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Date: 7/15/2019 1:16:00 AM
It feels so good to find your poetry again sweet Eileen.Life has cursed us and life has blessed us in many ways...How beautiful if only life could let us taste what never ending love is all about...but I doubt that exists..Life is like a roller-coaster..Love cones and love goes..to come again even stronger.Beautiful poem Eileen.
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Date: 7/12/2019 2:41:00 AM
Lovely writing style...Enjoyed
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Date: 7/11/2019 10:30:00 AM
As always artfully expressed but as well disturbing. Art should make us uncomfortable and cause us to think as well as feel. This does that in spades. Warm thoughts and prayers headed to you. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/11/2019 10:11:00 AM
Eileen, I like this poem of life unrequited. -Richard
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