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Life

You fleet so blithely, unaware
That here I stand, awash with care
My heart is heavy, lost to thrill
Of dreams deterred, it’s had its fill

I think of all that’s left undone
Of trophies that I haven’t won
Your blessings you did not bestow
Now time is short, and that I know

You mock me, Life, with hurtful glee
For me no joyous jubilee
My zenith, passed, my strength has waned
But tell me Life, what have you gained?

One less soul to tempt your fate
And as I linger at the gate
So loathe to leave you, though unkind
In death no solace can I find

So in this time that still remains
Come let us kiss, forget the pains
Life, be enticed to lover’s tryst
Grant me the joys that I have missed

Let’s fall in love, before I’m gone
Admit, dear Life, you’ve done me wrong
Let passion bless my dying days
For only then, I’ll sing your praise

Inflame my veins with your embrace
No tortured thought, but blissful grace
Life, intercourse with you is sweet
In this full bloom, the end I’ll greet

Bathed in the beauty of release
Where every conscious thought must cease
In afterglow of ecstasy
Please end my life, and let me be

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hind Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 6:22 PM
This is sad. Very beautiful with a lot of emotions though- wishing you the best, Eileen. <3
Meade Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 3:41 PM
Your words light up the page and the essence of your word still rings true with my head. Little One, may you always be "bathed in the beauty of release" and your words continue to spread joy to us! Miss you!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Thanks again Eileen for the birthday blog. Hugs Rick.
Rees Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Well. Life. what was that all about ? Nicely written thoughts for Everyman (and woman).
Mcintosh Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 8:56 AM
I miss your poetry... I hadn't been back in a while, but had fave'd several of your poems. This is a wonder. God bless you and I hope to hear from you.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 7:44 AM
So sad you have not been back.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 9:09 AM
This one is in the top 100 new poems. Congrats.
Strempfl Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 6:20 AM
I just like to say that I could relate to this poem and the thoughts with effort. Enjoyable
Lamoureux Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Dropping by with a hello and a hug.
Chircop Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 1:16 AM
It feels so good to find your poetry again sweet Eileen.Life has cursed us and life has blessed us in many ways...How beautiful if only life could let us taste what never ending love is all about...but I doubt that exists..Life is like a roller-coaster..Love cones and love goes..to come again even stronger.Beautiful poem Eileen.
Michael Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 2:41 AM
Lovely writing style...Enjoyed
Lamoureux Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 10:30 AM
As always artfully expressed but as well disturbing. Art should make us uncomfortable and cause us to think as well as feel. This does that in spades. Warm thoughts and prayers headed to you. Hugs Rick.
Theraven Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 10:11 AM
Eileen, I like this poem of life unrequited. -Richard
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