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Sometimes we break our own hearts
We look for love or something to start
For some it takes only a spark
It's tradition for women to make it look hard
Though inside inside they dramatise to make it art
Waiting for compremise before guarding departs
No matter the age a boy or a man
Sometimes it's according to God's own plan
If a feeling is reach that they understand
From kindergarden to the grave I've seen it first hand
But for some there's rejection that we do not understand

You thought they were beautiful so you started to call
But in rejection we see the result of a fall
Sometimes a teacher, the result of a stall
For young boys such as I rarely recall
We looked for marriage and through detriment it stalled
Jelousy being the writing on the wall
We need two parties to say "I do"
And just for that moment make it true
Each with the hope to make it through
To suffer in life with children too
To celebrate a marriage when each year is due
Sometimes suspisions arrive when we don't have a clue
We're forced to stay when we dion't know what to do
I've seen others when the answer is sue
But I've also seen those when some stuck it through
The reasons they vary from kids to cause
It goes from justic or just God's law
Sometimes it ends with the elderly avoiding that claw
Remaining together just as God saw

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Date: 2/14/2024 7:38:00 AM
A wonderful poem that expresses so much. A reflective read too. All the trials and tribulations of love. I especially enjoyed the last two lines. Well written.Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you:)
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Date: 2/14/2024 5:26:00 AM
You express all the paths of love from anticipation and courting to matrimonial bliss and even touch on the challenges! I love the energy and the melodic flow. Great job!
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Date: 2/11/2024 6:33:00 AM
This is such a wonderful write reminiscing in love. Much enjoyed the voice of this poem--your heartfelt invitation to love!
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