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Leaf

Red leaf with the stars, falling. Maroon dusk crawling. Twirling last dance! Prettier, livelier than ever before.
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Date: 5/8/2025 4:27:00 PM
Very beautiful- "Maroon dusk crawling" just a lovely metaphor
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/8/2025 4:42:00 PM
Heartfelt thanks, dear Paige.
Date: 5/8/2025 4:16:00 AM
Dear Evelyn, this is beautiful and so descriptive and creative how youv written for the prompt! Love the colors and how picturesque it is! I can see now the picture too and it goes very well with your word weaving too! Everything about this is stunning! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/8/2025 4:40:00 PM
Deepest thanks for the great pleasure of your kind, thoughtful words, dear friend. They evoke inspiration and delight. I enjoyed your contest very much.
Date: 5/8/2025 1:47:00 AM
- Congratulations on your micro poem, Evelyn :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/8/2025 4:33:00 PM
Heartfelt thanks, Anne-Lise. hugs :)
Date: 5/7/2025 2:06:00 AM
Hopefully we'll get a result. A lovely short poem, much appreciated. Best for a win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/7/2025 8:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Victor. :)
Date: 5/1/2025 3:22:00 AM
just beautiful, you are talented poet
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/1/2025 10:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Yann. :)
Date: 4/30/2025 9:40:00 AM
- Beautiful to see with your words, Evelyn :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/30/2025 2:43:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely compliment and well wishes, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
Date: 4/29/2025 5:31:00 PM
I feel life, energy, and solace in your poem. It has a maroon quality, permeating a quiet environment. Summer has arrived. The words are lovely.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/30/2025 2:40:00 PM
Hilda, thank you so much for your delightful remarks. Glad you enjoyed the colors and mood of the poem. Best wishes.
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