Leaf

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For the Micro Poem Poetry Contest,
Sponsored by Ink Empress

Red leaf
with the stars,
falling.
Maroon dusk
crawling.
Twirling last
dance! 
Prettier, livelier
than ever
before.

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/8/2025 4:27:00 PM

Very beautiful- "Maroon dusk crawling" just a lovely metaphor

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/8/2025 4:42:00 PM

Heartfelt thanks, dear Paige.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 4:16:00 AM

Dear Evelyn, this is beautiful and so descriptive and creative how youv written for the prompt! Love the colors and how picturesque it is! I can see now the picture too and it goes very well with your word weaving too! Everything about this is stunning! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/8/2025 4:40:00 PM

Deepest thanks for the great pleasure of your kind, thoughtful words, dear friend. They evoke inspiration and delight. I enjoyed your contest very much.