Kaleidoscopic Love

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For Nette Onclaud's Some Kind Of Kaleidoscopic Poetry Contest

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Hues of motion spun as into your eyes I dove. In light of pure delight I swam. Reflections wove a vibrant pulsing glow - love’s brilliant treasure trove.

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Ron VanHooser

Date: 8/2/2025 4:16:00 PM

Andrea, this is beautiful, I love it! There is love in every word and line. Well done! Keep up the great work! Ron

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/23/2025 4:36:00 AM

Andrea, this is a beautifully vivid and tender poem. The imagery of diving into someone’s eyes and swimming in light captures the depth and joy of love so gracefully. Such a luminous and heartfelt treasure in just a few lines!

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 7/18/2025 7:30:00 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a cheerful and cute poem on colourful love, delightfully penned. Wishing you a delightful coming weekend

Howard Kerr

Date: 7/18/2025 6:05:00 AM

Andrea, I have returned to congratulate you on your outright victory with an enchanting poem with immense staying power. An embarrassment of riches reside in this sophisticated work. Howard