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For Nette Onclaud's Some Kind Of Kaleidoscopic Poetry Contest

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Hues of motion spun as into your eyes I dove. In light of pure delight I swam. Reflections wove a vibrant pulsing glow - love’s brilliant treasure trove.

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Date: 7/14/2025 10:55:00 PM
loved your words, so sincere and deep have a nice day
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Date: 7/14/2025 2:59:00 PM
"In light of pure delight I swam." -- closer to the source of love, brighter the endearing sparkles. Fireflies of flashy kisses. Beautiful poetry.
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Date: 7/14/2025 2:50:00 PM
Very nice! Like the rhyming and the kaleidoscopic eyes!
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Date: 7/14/2025 10:24:00 AM
I love short nive poems. This is the one.
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Date: 7/14/2025 5:42:00 AM
Hi Andrea A lovely haunting piece of astonishing craft. Wishing you the best in contest Howard
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Date: 7/13/2025 12:48:00 PM
Ah, love this- sweetly written, good luck in the contest
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