Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

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For Nette Onclaud's Some Kind Of Kaleidoscopic Poetry Contest

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Kaleidoscopic Love

hues of motion spun 
   into your eyes
                         I dove
In light of pure delight
   I swam
        reflections wove
  a vibrant   p u l s i n g   glow 
love’s brilliant 
                  treasure trove.

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Mark Toney June 19, 2026 at 10:59 AM Beautiful.

Ron VanHooser August 2, 2025 at 4:16 PM Andrea, this is beautiful, I love it! There is love in every word and line. Well done! Keep up the great work! Ron

Rowena Velasco July 23, 2025 at 4:36 AM Andrea, this is a beautifully vivid and tender poem. The imagery of diving into someone’s eyes and swimming in light captures the depth and joy of love so gracefully. Such a luminous and heartfelt treasure in just a few lines!

Krishnanand Guptar July 18, 2025 at 7:30 AM Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a cheerful and cute poem on colourful love, delightfully penned. Wishing you a delightful coming weekend

Howard Kerr July 18, 2025 at 6:05 AM Andrea, I have returned to congratulate you on your outright victory with an enchanting poem with immense staying power. An embarrassment of riches reside in this sophisticated work. Howard

Christine Watts July 17, 2025 at 8:29 PM Hi Andrea Congratulations on your win lovely words Cheers Christine

Line Gauthier July 17, 2025 at 1:43 PM lovely ~ congrats on your win, Andrea.

Crystol Woods July 17, 2025 at 10:55 AM I'm not even mad to see you in first place again lol... seriously, it is deserved. You have such a talent with words my friend. Congratulations! Xo

Yann Rolland July 14, 2025 at 10:55 PM loved your words, so sincere and deep have a nice day

Joseph P. DiMino July 14, 2025 at 2:59 PM "In light of pure delight I swam." -- closer to the source of love, brighter the endearing sparkles. Fireflies of flashy kisses. Beautiful poetry.

Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2025 at 2:50 PM Very nice! Like the rhyming and the kaleidoscopic eyes!

Jay Narain July 14, 2025 at 10:24 AM I love short nive poems. This is the one.

Howard Kerr July 14, 2025 at 5:42 AM Hi Andrea A lovely haunting piece of astonishing craft. Wishing you the best in contest Howard

Paige Hind July 13, 2025 at 12:48 PM Ah, love this- sweetly written, good luck in the contest