Inheritance of Wind

Written: September 6, 2025 ************** The wind does not knock— it slips through the soul’s lattice, a breathless envoy from the hush between stars. It strokes the cheek such as a spirit reliving purity,  then fades away,  becoming simply a whisper  of a melody sewn into stillness. My terms come apart  in the string of stems,  where faint words  weave between tufts of grass  that curl with hymns  that are lenient to say. Birdsong flows from lungs in rooms full of people— a hymn to the untamed,  to the pain that hums  simply seeking to be felt. Love, in its most genuine form,  surpasses the structure of cognition—  It resides in the root of air,  in the rhythm of the intangible. No note is ever lost— each tender tremble, each faltering flight, is archived in the breath between dusk and dawn. We save our dreams. In the shaft of the Horizon,  in sparkles that linger  on the verge of entropy.  These are the germs of tomorrow  tumbling in the blood  of the eternity we dare to call.
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Date: 9/11/2025 4:46:00 PM
Wow. Amazing work, and a fav of me :)
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Date: 9/7/2025 9:26:00 AM
Hi Sotto, you wrote "Love, in its most genuine form, surpasses the structure of cognition." Great idea that encompass humanity in what should be our ideal.
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Date: 9/6/2025 5:56:00 PM
Your poem resonated with me on a couple of levels. I'd like to have a couple of the verses on a poster in my office. This poem is masterfully written with an exquisite flow. You outdid yourself with this one!
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