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In-Between Days

Scarlet sun peeks through
a slit in darkling storm clouds.
Butterflies go home.
Sky meets sea at plum border
as pink moon trails, in order.

colormoonnatureseasunsettanka

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Deb M

Date: 3/2/2025 12:31:00 AM

Incredibly beautiful Evelyn! Congratulations on POTW! Debx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/7/2025 4:37:00 PM

Congrats on POTD! Beautiful!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 6:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Kim. Actually, this work received POTW. Very best wishes.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/7/2025 3:12:00 PM

Simply beautiful ... CayCay

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 6:41:00 PM

Thank you very much, CayCay.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/7/2025 3:26:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on the POTW.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 10:26:00 AM

Victor, thank you so much for your kind thoughts. :)

Maria Williams

Date: 2/6/2025 10:37:00 PM

What a beautiful poem dear Evelyn, so much depth in a few lines. Congratulations on your POTW and thanks so much for subscribing to my Poetic Rythms channel, I truly appreciate it...Hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 9:57:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Maria. I was very happy to subscribe to your channel, because I love you and your husband, Ron's work. Very best wishes.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/6/2025 10:05:00 PM

Congratulations on POTW. I like this poemwith such great anticipation for that storm cloud to crack open with rain.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 9:51:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely words of congratulations, Hilda. Blessings and hugs. :)

Daisy Meadows

Date: 2/5/2025 1:51:00 AM

A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTW. Well done!.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/5/2025 8:11:00 PM

Deepest, heartfelt thanks for your kind words, Daisy.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/5/2025 12:48:00 AM

wow, Congratulations on POTW dear poet. +FAV

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/5/2025 8:09:00 PM

I extend heartfelt thanks for your warm congratulations, Thriveni. Thanks also for your kind fave. :)

John Read

Date: 2/4/2025 8:37:00 AM

Hi Evelyn congratulations on your well deserved POTW.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2025 6:11:00 PM

Hi, John. I extend my heartfelt thanks. :)

Tom Woody

Date: 2/4/2025 6:30:00 AM

Yay! Enjoy your special week Evelyn

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2025 6:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Tom. :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/4/2025 12:21:00 AM

A lovely Tanka Evelyn, perfectly describing a sinking sunset. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Beryl

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2025 6:09:00 PM

You have my warmest thanks, Beryl. :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/3/2025 4:58:00 AM

Dear Evelyn, this is a breathtaking dance of color and calm, where nature’s delicate pauses sing louder than storms. I love how your words feel like the serene exhale we didn’t know we needed. POTW is so deserved. Congratulations, my friend. Beautifully done! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/3/2025 6:12:00 PM

Dear Daniel, thank you so much for your uplifting and kind thoughts. It's so lovely to read your comment today. My very best wishes, Evelyn

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/3/2025 3:34:00 AM

Evelyn, beautiful imagery, congratulations on POTW.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/3/2025 6:07:00 PM

Thank you for the wonderful compliment and congratulations, Tania. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2025 1:44:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., Evelyn ... enjoy :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/3/2025 6:04:00 PM

Heartfelt thanks, Anne-Lise. :) hugs

Karen Jones

Date: 2/2/2025 2:34:00 PM

Love the imagery Evelyn! Congrats on potw!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/2/2025 6:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Karen. Blessings.

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 2/2/2025 2:11:00 PM

Nice title. Congrats on your POTW! Thanks for sharing!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/2/2025 6:14:00 PM

Deepest thanks, Benjamin. :)

John Lawless

Date: 2/2/2025 8:34:00 AM

love the simple beauty of this Evelyn...had me exhaling, relaxing, and ...well....just sitting right there in the middle of this masterpiece.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/2/2025 6:12:00 PM

I appreciate your warm remarks very much. Thank you, John.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/2/2025 8:17:00 AM

This image leaves me in awe. ' Scarlet sun peeks through, ' as ' butterflies go home. ' The beauty that surrounds us is breathtaking in every way. I like your title. I'm always reminded of those ( in-between moments ). Yes, the space between days. So blessed to embrace each one. Congratulations Evelyn, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/2/2025 6:10:00 PM

Thank you for the thrill of your awesome comment, Brandy. Every sentence brought a smile. I hope your week is blessed. hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/2/2025 7:58:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again.... A story told in just 5 lines. I can see it. Have a blessed day with your win...................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/2/2025 6:04:00 PM

Thank you very much for your heartwarming words of appreciation and congratulations, Paula. Very best wishes.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/1/2025 9:41:00 AM

What a lovely write you have here. Great/pretty picture. "Good Luck" Have a fun weekend as you write away..................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/1/2025 7:28:00 PM

It's very nice to know that you enjoyed both the poem and the picture, Paula. Thank you for saying so, and for your good wishes, also. Blessings.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/1/2025 8:15:00 AM

Evelyn, this is a really lovely, vividly descriptive poem. I like to rhyme the last two lines of tanka too. Janice

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/1/2025 7:24:00 PM

Thank you for your kind thoughts, Janice. It's nice to know that someone else enjoys rhyming tankas. :) Best wishes, Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/31/2025 4:28:00 PM

A lovely scene!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/31/2025 6:05:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/31/2025 10:31:00 AM

Excellent poetry, Evelyn. Your alliteration is to be admired.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/31/2025 6:05:00 PM

Deepest thanks for your valuable remarks, my friend. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 1/31/2025 7:06:00 AM

This is so beautiful! You always write the most picturesque tanka and this is no exception! I love the imagery youv painted in such an artistic manner and also the picture youv used here is gorgeous! Pleasure reading this gem! A fave this is for me! Sending you light always

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/31/2025 6:08:00 PM

I am so honored by your warm, uplifting, words, and also by your fave. Thank you so much. Many blessings.