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Poetry/Hiki
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1744-509-09
All Right Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, July 09, 2025
For International Contest, 1395/ AI Free
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 07/13/2025

FIRST PLACE

hiku

  a   q  u  i  e  t   dawn lake
  where an   e
                   m
                     p
                       t
                        y   canoe floats-
              as   b  i  r  d s
                                   t
                                 r
                                i
                               l
                              l
                        in trees

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/16/2025 12:26:00 PM great job here, and I like the T alliteration. Congrats Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/16/2025 7:52:00 PM Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congrats

Eileen Manassian Date: 7/14/2025 8:18:00 AM You're so talented!!! Loved the imagery in this... trilling in trees... beautiful. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/14/2025 1:11:00 PM Eileen, thank you so much for the compliments and comment, hugs

Suzette Richards Date: 7/13/2025 4:03:00 AM Oh, I love the consonance and assonance (we can take our pick) in the end: 'birds trill in trees'. Now I will be quiet and enjoy the poem and the picture. Have a nice Sunday, Constance. :) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/14/2025 1:12:00 PM Suzette, thank you for the compliment on my poem, and comment, appreciate so much, hugs

Jack Horne Date: 7/12/2025 10:48:00 AM love this fab creative write, my friend - will read more next time (I'm trying to catch up with comments). Hope all is good with you - will send more postcards as I guess by now the last ones were definitely lost in the post Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/12/2025 6:12:00 PM Jack, nice to see you on the soup, its been awhile and thank you for the compliment. Oh yes, our Canadian mail is really terrible, I am sure the postcards are lost, its been quite a long time since you mailed them. Hope eveything is ok with your mom.

Hilda Greenhough Date: 7/12/2025 6:00:00 AM A lovely haiku. Good luck with the contest. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/12/2025 6:13:00 PM Hilda, thank you for the compliment and encouragement

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 7/9/2025 12:40:00 PM As birds trill in trees, nice poem! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/12/2025 6:13:00 PM Abdullah, thank you for the compliment

Tom Valles Date: 7/9/2025 12:25:00 PM Beautiful, Constance. Easy to visualize being there in the picture. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/12/2025 6:14:00 PM Tom, thank you so much for the nice compliment and comment