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Poetry/Hiki
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1744-509-09
All Right Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, July 09, 2025
For International Contest, 1395/ AI Free
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 07/13/2025

FIRST PLACE

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  a   q  u  i  e  t   dawn lake
  where an   e
                   m
                     p
                       t
                        y   canoe floats-
              as   b  i  r  d s
                                   t
                                 r
                                i
                               l
                              l
                        in trees

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2025 12:26:00 PM

great job here, and I like the T alliteration. Congrats

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2025 7:52:00 PM

Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congrats

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/14/2025 8:18:00 AM

You're so talented!!! Loved the imagery in this... trilling in trees... beautiful.

Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2025 1:11:00 PM

Eileen, thank you so much for the compliments and comment, hugs

Suzette Richards

Date: 7/13/2025 4:03:00 AM

Oh, I love the consonance and assonance (we can take our pick) in the end: 'birds trill in trees'. Now I will be quiet and enjoy the poem and the picture. Have a nice Sunday, Constance. :)

Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2025 1:12:00 PM

Suzette, thank you for the compliment on my poem, and comment, appreciate so much, hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 7/12/2025 10:48:00 AM

love this fab creative write, my friend - will read more next time (I'm trying to catch up with comments). Hope all is good with you - will send more postcards as I guess by now the last ones were definitely lost in the post

Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2025 6:12:00 PM

Jack, nice to see you on the soup, its been awhile and thank you for the compliment. Oh yes, our Canadian mail is really terrible, I am sure the postcards are lost, its been quite a long time since you mailed them. Hope eveything is ok with your mom.