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Poetry/Hiki
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1744-509-09
All Right Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
Copying  any part of this work is prohibited without permission

Written, July 09, 2025
For International Contest, 1395/ AI Free
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 07/13/2025

FIRST PLACE

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a q u i e t dawn lake where an e m p t y canoe floats- as b i r d s t r i l l in trees

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/16/2025 12:26:00 PM
great job here, and I like the T alliteration. Congrats
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Date: 7/16/2025 7:52:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congrats
Date: 7/14/2025 8:18:00 AM
You're so talented!!! Loved the imagery in this... trilling in trees... beautiful.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2025 1:11:00 PM
Eileen, thank you so much for the compliments and comment, hugs
Date: 7/13/2025 4:03:00 AM
Oh, I love the consonance and assonance (we can take our pick) in the end: 'birds trill in trees'. Now I will be quiet and enjoy the poem and the picture. Have a nice Sunday, Constance. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2025 1:12:00 PM
Suzette, thank you for the compliment on my poem, and comment, appreciate so much, hugs
Date: 7/12/2025 10:48:00 AM
love this fab creative write, my friend - will read more next time (I'm trying to catch up with comments). Hope all is good with you - will send more postcards as I guess by now the last ones were definitely lost in the post
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Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2025 6:12:00 PM
Jack, nice to see you on the soup, its been awhile and thank you for the compliment. Oh yes, our Canadian mail is really terrible, I am sure the postcards are lost, its been quite a long time since you mailed them. Hope eveything is ok with your mom.
Date: 7/12/2025 6:00:00 AM
A lovely haiku. Good luck with the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2025 6:13:00 PM
Hilda, thank you for the compliment and encouragement
Date: 7/9/2025 12:40:00 PM
As birds trill in trees, nice poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2025 6:13:00 PM
Abdullah, thank you for the compliment
Date: 7/9/2025 12:25:00 PM
Beautiful, Constance. Easy to visualize being there in the picture.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2025 6:14:00 PM
Tom, thank you so much for the nice compliment and comment

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