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Hibernation

Fearless Excavation!
Dirt flies into the air.
Turtle Devastation, 
As he digs a muddy lair.

Mindful Contemplation.
Winter weather is quite near.
Springtime Fascination
Is when turtle reappears.

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Valsa George Date: 10/27/2024 3:38:00 AM Turtles are interesting creatures. The winter hibernation is a part of many creatures. Intersting are the ways of nature. Enjoyed your beautifully rhyming poem, dear Hilda. Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 10/27/2024 6:21:00 AM Thank you.

Alesia Leach Date: 10/26/2024 12:17:00 PM Loved the poem. Didn't know turtles hibernate. Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 10/26/2024 3:25:00 PM Some kids found a turtle in summer and it was kept for a pet. It subsequently disappeared. The next year it was found hidden in dirt that the dogs were trying to uncover. We set it free in a pond.

Paige Hind Date: 10/10/2024 4:05:00 PM AW, I love turtles. So cute! Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 10/11/2024 11:43:00 PM Yes, a cute amphibian. They always seem happy.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/4/2024 12:08:00 PM Fun! Love the imagery and action! Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 10/4/2024 12:31:00 PM Thank you.

Ink Empress Date: 10/1/2024 7:59:00 AM I love turtles, so loved that you mentioned that, and the rhymes here is so very creative and well written! I love the opening the most in this and depth of what youv conveyed! When its cold and raining i tend to hibernate too! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 10/1/2024 8:11:00 AM Thank you. I am preparing for my hibernation also.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/30/2024 8:32:00 PM A charming depiction, Hilda! I smiled at every line, especially the first two. :D Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 9/30/2024 8:55:00 PM I'm happy that you liked it. Those first two lines got me centered for the rest of the poem. I send best wishes your way.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/30/2024 5:35:00 PM Cute…expected a bear. Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 9/30/2024 5:46:00 PM Bears are more popular than turtles, but I thought it to be about time that turtles get a review. Yay for both.. thanks for your comment.

Joseph May Date: 9/30/2024 5:04:00 PM An essential part of the turtle's life, Nicely expressed Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 9/30/2024 5:25:00 PM Yes, but they don't seem to mind. Mud is probably good for their shells.

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/30/2024 4:50:00 PM I like your poem..I could visualize the scenes. The animals at work was a delight. Merci…Pangie Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 9/30/2024 5:23:00 PM Thank you. Animals are mysterious.

Deb M Date: 9/30/2024 2:12:00 PM This is a lovely sweet poem Hilda! Debx Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 9/30/2024 3:17:00 PM I'm glad you like it. Thanks.

Karen Jones Date: 9/30/2024 12:56:00 PM A delightful poem Hilda! Enjoyed Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 9/30/2024 1:21:00 PM Thank you.