Hibernation

Fearless Excavation!
Dirt flies into the air.
Turtle Devastation, 
As he digs a muddy lair.

Mindful Contemplation.
Winter weather is quite near.
Springtime Fascination
Is when turtle reappears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 3:38 AM
Turtles are interesting creatures. The winter hibernation is a part of many creatures. Intersting are the ways of nature. Enjoyed your beautifully rhyming poem, dear Hilda.
Greenhough Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 6:21 AM
Thank you.
Leach Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Loved the poem. Didn't know turtles hibernate.
Greenhough Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 3:25 PM
Some kids found a turtle in summer and it was kept for a pet. It subsequently disappeared. The next year it was found hidden in dirt that the dogs were trying to uncover. We set it free in a pond.
Hind Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 4:05 PM
AW, I love turtles. So cute!
Greenhough Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 11:43 PM
Yes, a cute amphibian. They always seem happy.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 12:08 PM
Fun! Love the imagery and action!
Greenhough Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Thank you.
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 7:59 AM
I love turtles, so loved that you mentioned that, and the rhymes here is so very creative and well written! I love the opening the most in this and depth of what youv conveyed! When its cold and raining i tend to hibernate too! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always
Greenhough Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Thank you. I am preparing for my hibernation also.
Buehler Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 8:32 PM
A charming depiction, Hilda! I smiled at every line, especially the first two. :D
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 8:55 PM
I'm happy that you liked it. Those first two lines got me centered for the rest of the poem. I send best wishes your way.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 5:35 PM
Cute…expected a bear.
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Bears are more popular than turtles, but I thought it to be about time that turtles get a review. Yay for both.. thanks for your comment.
May Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 5:04 PM
An essential part of the turtle's life, Nicely expressed
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 5:25 PM
Yes, but they don't seem to mind. Mud is probably good for their shells.
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 4:50 PM
I like your poem..I could visualize the scenes. The animals at work was a delight. Merci…Pangie
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 5:23 PM
Thank you. Animals are mysterious.
M  Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 2:12 PM
This is a lovely sweet poem Hilda! Debx
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 3:17 PM
I'm glad you like it. Thanks.
Jones Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 12:56 PM
A delightful poem Hilda! Enjoyed
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Thank you.
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