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Date June 5, 2025      6.29 am

 

hermit

ascetic
monk cloistered in isle
searching light
through prayer
freed from world’s cacophonies
for his inner peace


Contest Title: Spin A Shadorma Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date: June 5, 2025    6.29am

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Len Gasun Date: 6/14/2025 1:43:00 AM SPIN A SHADORMA Contest Judged: 6/6/2025 9:51:00 AM Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Place: 3 ( up to 5th multi-w) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/8/2025 8:52:00 AM Descriptive and expressive work in this Shadorma. I enjoyed reading it. I have not checked out this contest, but it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K..I like the picture also. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/8/2025 8:55:00 AM Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/7/2025 4:27:00 PM Wonderful, dear friend. Great pic too. Congrats Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/7/2025 6:56:00 PM Thank you dear poet friend. Congrats to you too> Hugs

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/7/2025 6:04:00 AM Congrats, Len! Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/7/2025 6:56:00 PM Thank you dear poet friend Kim. Congrats too.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/6/2025 12:14:00 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "hermit" write with a great picture. It must be a hard life for them. Only a few can live like this with God's help. Hugs.... Have a blessed day with your win....... Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/7/2025 6:55:00 PM Thank you so much my dear poet friend. I agree with you dear. Congrats to you as well and Have a Blessed day too with your win too. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/4/2025 5:59:00 PM Is it easier to be all alone then to deal with poeple. Surely God separated some people for his purposes. Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/5/2025 6:20:00 AM Thank you for reading my poem dear poet friend Kim. It depends. If we're a busy writer, painter and others that we need to focus on our work, then we need to. You're right. God separated some people for HIS Loving Purposes.