Len Gasun Poet Shadorma

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Date June 5, 2025      6.29 am

 

hermit

ascetic
monk cloistered in isle
searching light
through prayer
freed from world’s cacophonies
for his inner peace


Contest Title: Spin A Shadorma Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date: June 5, 2025    6.29am

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Len Gasun June 14, 2025 at 1:43 AM SPIN A SHADORMA Contest Judged: 6/6/2025 9:51:00 AM Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Place: 3 ( up to 5th multi-w)

Sara Kendrick June 8, 2025 at 8:52 AM Descriptive and expressive work in this Shadorma. I enjoyed reading it. I have not checked out this contest, but it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K..I like the picture also. Sara Kendrick June 8, 2025 at 8:55 AM Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2025 at 4:27 PM Wonderful, dear friend. Great pic too. Congrats Len Gasun June 7, 2025 at 6:56 PM Thank you dear poet friend. Congrats to you too> Hugs

Kim Rodrigues June 7, 2025 at 6:04 AM Congrats, Len! Len Gasun June 7, 2025 at 6:56 PM Thank you dear poet friend Kim. Congrats too.

Paula Goldsmith June 6, 2025 at 12:14 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "hermit" write with a great picture. It must be a hard life for them. Only a few can live like this with God's help. Hugs.... Have a blessed day with your win....... Len Gasun June 7, 2025 at 6:55 PM Thank you so much my dear poet friend. I agree with you dear. Congrats to you as well and Have a Blessed day too with your win too. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2025 at 5:59 PM Is it easier to be all alone then to deal with poeple. Surely God separated some people for his purposes. Len Gasun June 5, 2025 at 6:20 AM Thank you for reading my poem dear poet friend Kim. It depends. If we're a busy writer, painter and others that we need to focus on our work, then we need to. You're right. God separated some people for HIS Loving Purposes.