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Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall Poetry Contest

Sponsor Andrea Dietrich

Second Place

Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall

                                Half past Summer, two months till Fall
                                A Monet image, relishing! 
                                Brisk sienna steppingstones sprawl
                                Half past Summer, two months till Fall                                               
                                Whiffs of earthy cinnabar loll
                                Gold aspens strewn embellishing                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              
                                Half past Summer, two months till Fall
                                A Monet image, relishing!

autumnbeautytriolet

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David Crandall

Date: 8/9/2025 3:52:00 PM

beautiful images and flow!

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/9/2025 4:25:00 PM

Ty David, you are a brilliant poet, blessings __Anaya

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/31/2025 12:48:00 PM

Well I definitely fall for your lines here Anaya ‘ a good write all round’ but we Are talking aspens! Dang i did not Really look at the scene and an apple Trees fruit is ripening outside my window So there we go.' Great write and scene though Apologies for not noting more.)

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/1/2025 10:31:00 AM

Ty Joe, altho you may not think the picture above is an impressionists (painter, Monet perhaps wouldn't think so) dream, I do!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/29/2025 9:10:00 PM

Excellent, excellent, excellent and have I told you it's excellent? The Triolet is such a good time form to play with, but one must nail 'prime' words to relay image and impact as joined with repeating lines. Brevity forms are like that, yeah, they are. You did an impressive job and gifted us with a lovely poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/1/2025 10:29:00 AM

The repeating line is the element is most daunting for this poet, and can't take all of the credit for it was given as an 'may use' as you can see Andreas title. The rest I gave my best! TyVm for a kind review and a kind poetess__Anaya ;)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/28/2025 12:47:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Wish I had the pretty picture... Have a blessed day with your win................

CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/29/2025 9:12:00 PM

how cool, good to know - I am glad that I scrolled in the wrong direction

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/28/2025 1:17:00 PM

Right click and scroll down to search web for picture. TyVm!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2025 10:46:00 AM

Beautiful images in your triolet, Anaya I like that you incorporated the title into it. Congrats

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/28/2025 1:18:00 PM

TyVm Andrea for the placement, a pleasure entering, so much fun!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/28/2025 7:00:00 AM

Congrats!

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/28/2025 10:28:00 AM

Thankx!

Valsa George

Date: 7/21/2025 9:57:00 PM

Your poem celebrates autumn with the imagery of burnt sienna steps and golden aspen leaves, lying strewn. The picture looks like a Monet painting (or is it truly one?) Love your entry, dear Anaya. All the Best.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/22/2025 2:48:00 PM

It's an autumnal image on Bing. TyVm, Valsa xhugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/21/2025 12:45:00 PM

Excellent…love the imagery, the scents, the thoughts!

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/22/2025 2:47:00 PM

Glad you liked! Ty

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/21/2025 10:46:00 AM

What a lovely write and pretty picture you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" We both did this one. I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/20/2025 5:33:00 PM

Anaya, your lovely triolet and the chosen artwork are the perfect pair~~both describing the beauties of fall that I SO love. Janice

Anne Winter

Date: 7/20/2025 5:30:00 AM

Dear Anaya, I love this! I love fall! It's my favourite season even though I have started to love summer too. But I'll always love fall. Reading this poem just made my autumnal heart happy! Thank you for writing this! Best, Anne

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/20/2025 12:11:00 PM

I'll find ways of greeting every season and month with understanding nature's importance There is always a celebration to be part of, it's all good. TyVm! :)

Paige Hind

Date: 7/19/2025 3:05:00 PM

Love this, Anaya! Should be a winner :) <3

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/19/2025 3:27:00 PM

I poured everything I had into it! I trust in you Paige!!!!! :D