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Gracious Grace

Gotta Love Alliteration 5-21-24
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Gracious Grace

Endless effervescence of grace,
In riots of radiance, infected by innocence,
Seeks out the heart harassed by humiliation –
Wrapped in sleepless shrouds of incensed worry –
When alliterations of angst plunder soiled spirits with pandemonium
Grace, the eternal romantic, lavishes love.

Purity, born of playful purity,
Tames tempests of melancholy mistrals
As midnight murmurs into dawn’s jubilant joy
As dusky dews flow from fountains of forgiveness
With eternal elixirs from the everlasting
For the pensive plea of the penitent pilgrim.

Grace sings the ageless anthem of sweetest sanctuary
In honeyed breaths for the hobbled heart to inhale
Ever abiding loveliness, always in ascent, 
Tingling with tenderness, opening soldered seas of sin,
Miracle made manifest in majestic melody
With promises penned in poems of peacefulness.

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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/1/2024 3:40:00 AM Great alliteration in this one, Sam. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Alliteration is not so easy for me. Sara K Login to Reply Sam Kauffman Date: 8/1/2024 10:51:00 AM Thank you so much for your visit, Sara, and for your "gracious" feedback that is so encouraging to me. I so appreciate it. I hope you will continue to work with alliteration as you write so wonderfully. Writing lyrics really helped me to strengthen this skill. Blessings!!

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/24/2024 9:09:00 PM Sam, your stunning, meaningful, poem is a gem. I enjoyed the skillful alliteration employed. Nicely written and so inspiring! Blessings. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/24/2024 7:37:00 PM Bravo, Sara. Just the right amount of alliteration in this gorgeous poem Login to Reply Sam Kauffman Date: 8/1/2024 10:55:00 AM Well, here I am trying to catch up again! Thank you for your accolades! I was hoping I hadn't been too heave handed with the alliteration so I really appreciate your insightful assessment! Many thanks. Blessings of grace to you!

Paige Hind Date: 5/22/2024 2:09:00 PM What a line "In honeyed breaths for the hobbled heart to inhale" wow- enjoyed reading this Login to Reply Sam Kauffman Date: 5/23/2024 10:41:00 AM Hi Paige! Thank you many times over for your wonderful feedback. I am so happy that you enjoyed this attempt to understand God's grace and the gracious personality of grace! Sending you my gratitude and blessings of grace!

Silent One Date: 5/22/2024 10:39:00 AM Amazing alliterations.. Your poem concludes with grace being described as "ever abiding loveliness, always in ascent," which evokes a sense of constant growth and elevation. The imagery of "tingling with tenderness" and "opening soldered seas of sin" suggests that grace not only heals but also liberates, breaking the bonds of sin and leading to spiritual freedom. The final lines, "Miracle made manifest in majestic melody / With promises penned in poems of peacefulness," underscore the divine and poetic nature of grace, encapsulating its essence as a source of eternal peace and joy Login to Reply Sam Kauffman Date: 5/23/2024 10:38:00 AM Hi SO! Thank you so much for this beautiful message full of grace! Your feedback goes right to the heart of this poem (as always) - the full blessings of grace, the ability to heal and the ability of grace to "liberate" attitudes. Working through my understanding of grace through this poem was a walk through new understandings especially thinking about grace always "in ascent." I am so grateful for your your visit and the opportunity to share this poem with you! Sending you ascending grace!

Valsa George Date: 5/22/2024 4:53:00 AM In grace, there is abiding loveliness. It elevates hearts, forgives sins, lavishes love. Grace is a divine influence 'tingling with tenderness and opening soldered seas of sin'. It is "miracle made manifest in majestic melody/ With promises penned in poems of peacefulness." Lovely poem with beautiful alliteration. All the Best dear Sam. Login to Reply Sam Kauffman Date: 5/22/2024 11:18:00 AM Dearest Valsa, thank you for your beautiful message. Because of writing this poem I now have a new understanding of the intrinsic beauty of grace. Seems to me "grace" never has a bad day. It is the product of eternal optimism - everlasting tenderness - the source of grace is perpetual. I am so happy you liked this poem and that we shared is the special and unique, flow of grace in our lives. Sending blessings of grace to you! Sam Kauffman Date: 5/22/2024 11:18:00 AM Dearest Valsa, thank you for your beautiful message. Because of writing this poem I now have a new understanding of the intrinsic beauty of grace. Seems to me "grace" never has a bad day. It is the product of eternal optimism - everlasting tenderness - the source of grace is perpetual. I am so happy you liked this poem and that we shared is the special and unique, flow of grace in our lives. Sending blessings of grace to you! Sam Kauffman Date: 5/22/2024 11:17:00 AM Dearest Valsa, thank you many times over for your beautiful message. Because of writing this poem I now have a new understanding of the intrinsic beauty of grace. Seems to me "grace" never has a bad day. It is the product of eternal optimism - everlasting tenderness and the source of grace is perpetual. I am so happy you liked this poem and that we shared is the special and unique, flow of grace in our lives. Sending blessings of grace to you! Sam Kauffman Date: 5/22/2024 11:16:00 AM Dearest Valsa, thank you many times over for your beautiful message. Because of writing this poem I now have a new understanding of the intrinsic beauty of grace. Seems to me "grace" never has a bad day. It is the product of eternal optimism - everlasting tenderness and the source of grace is perpetual. I am so happy you liked this poem and that we shared is the special and unique, flow of grace in our lives. Sending blessings of grace to you!

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/22/2024 3:51:00 AM Splendid alliteration, Sam. Voice of grace resonates throughout. Login to Reply Sam Kauffman Date: 5/22/2024 11:10:00 AM Hi Vijay! I am so grateful for your lovely feedback. Knowing that you heard the voice of grace through these words is truly a blessing. Thank you for that gift! Blessings.