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Tears from yesterday’s
ends in the clouds of both pasts
drowns pain in puddles
as this night’s moon burns through and
bathes a new love’s hope display.

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Contest:  Get Romantic
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Visual #2
03.02.15

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Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 12/29/2015 3:28:00 PM A splendid TANKA in perfect 57577 form with grammatical flow to boot! BRAVO Rob. Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 11/10/2015 1:21:00 PM Excellent Tanka Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/17/2015 8:53:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 3/11/2015 5:51:00 PM Grats on your contest placement. I love the refreshingness you have wrote here :) Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/8/2015 6:22:00 PM ROB, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/8/2015 12:00:00 PM Rob, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/7/2015 7:54:00 PM Great, romantic imagery, Rob...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/7/2015 5:41:00 PM It seems congratulations are in order. Thanks for hosting your Pierced contest, it resulted in some excellent poetry. I enjoyed reading and commenting on your winners list. Goodnight. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/7/2015 3:16:00 PM Congrats!!! Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2015 3:05:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Rob:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/7/2015 12:10:00 AM Rob, this one has some great imagery. congrats for your win. Soupmail. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/6/2015 12:34:00 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ...This one was a challenge..Thanks for dropping by..Sara Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 3/3/2015 1:41:00 AM Wonderful sad romantic rob! Oh i loved it,, sure to do well in contest,, best wishes!! Login to Reply

Cherl Dunn Date: 3/2/2015 1:14:00 PM Dear Rob, What a sad poetic write here my friend, but I did enjoy it's imagery and love your ending to pull it all together so well, thanks you for the congrads comment, I appricate your words of compliment and I love that line myself, cheri Login to Reply

Maverick Nyambu Date: 3/2/2015 11:56:00 AM Hi Rob, this is superbly terse! Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 3/2/2015 10:26:00 AM Nicely done Rob :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 3/2/2015 10:22:00 AM you have captured the image so well - great imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply