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Falling like lightening

From the clay moulded into being a substance 
Intoxicating spirit born free with moral choice intact 
inside the living waters breathes with life salt based 
unto moving forms crying for love unconditional pearls drop
Where it begins shape shifting vices around desires to kill 
Through a fire's ash with smouldering embers  
in all that remains positively sparked  negative 
incense of a souls domain burnt offering rises as smoke signals
The end of mere existence destroying human rights 
overshadowed by sin good is trampled upon as weak 
unto facts that are pinned down correctly under dirty deeds 
reveal a secret pact unforgiving faceless 
no true person whom believes in God 
under cardinal law twists the truth around murder as a just cause 
Politically this world circus denies us peace 
making a mockery of our church altering divine law to suit darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 8/9/2024 1:26:00 PM
Excellent write my dearest friend Liam! Most churches today, are corrupted and evil to the core anyway. What peace? There wont be any true peace at all , till our Lord Jesus returns, and this time He will return to the earth with a sword, and He’ll clean up all the mess that man had done from the beginning of this earth.1000 years of His reign from his throne in Israel, will be like paradise one more again on earth. Jesus will rule all the earth.Take good care!God bless you always! D.
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